机器— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar ko'p va gaplar tushunarsiz. Javobni aniq va to'g'ri tuzishga harakat qiling, masalan, "My favourite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me keep the house clean."

示例: My favourite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me keep the house clean efficiently.

建议: Javobingizda gaplar to'liq emas va takrorlanishlar bor. Aniq fikr bildiring va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning, masalan, "Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort in daily chores."

示例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort in daily chores.

建议: Javobingizda ma'no aniq emas va grammatik xatolar ko'p. Javobni aniq va mantiqiy qilib tuzing, masalan, "Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to understand how it works properly."

示例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to understand how it works properly.

建议: Javobingiz qisqa va grammatik jihatdan noto'g'ri. To'liq va aniq gaplar bilan fikringizni ifoda eting, masalan, "In my opinion, reading instructions is important because it helps you use the machine safely and correctly."

示例: In my opinion, reading instructions is important because it helps you use the machine safely and correctly.

× He tells Rose I have a number of a favorite fashion in my home.

✓ I have a number of favorite machines in my home.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure. 'He tells Rose' is irrelevant to the question and should be removed. 'A number of a favorite fashion' is incorrect; it should be 'a number of favorite machines' to make sense in context.

× Vacuum cleaner is am I so fabric machine in my home that's why if I.

✓ The vacuum cleaner is my favorite machine in my home, that's why I use it.

The sentence contains incorrect word order and wrong word choices. 'Is am I so fabric machine' is nonsensical. It should be corrected to a clear statement about the vacuum cleaner being the favorite machine.

× In I think. I wishing machine and sweeping machine is so important in humans life.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in human life.

'In I think' is incorrect; it should be 'I think'. 'Wishing machine' is a misspelling of 'washing machine'. 'Humans life' should be 'human life'. Also, plural forms and verb agreement need correction.

× I wishing machine and sweeping machine is so important in humans life.

✓ Washing machines and sweeping machines are so important in human life.

The subject is plural ('washing machines and sweeping machines'), so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'wishing' should be 'washing' and 'humans life' should be 'human life'.

× That's why people use everyday these types of machines.

✓ That's why people use these types of machines every day.

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the correct adverb form is 'every day' to indicate frequency.

× when I use some type of machine at the story read the instruction.

✓ When I use some type of machine, I read the instructions in the store.

'At the story' is incorrect; it should be 'in the store'. Also, the sentence needs a comma and plural 'instructions'.

× I don't understand the instruction book.

✓ I don't understand the instruction book.

This sentence is grammatically correct but could be improved by saying 'I don't understand the instruction manual' for clarity.

× I research assemblages about the mustard machine.

✓ I research assembly instructions about the machine.

'Assemblages' and 'mustard machine' are incorrect words here. The intended meaning is likely 'assembly instructions' and 'the machine'.

× My opinion is. Reading instruction about the machine is so important.

✓ In my opinion, reading instructions about the machine is very important.

The original sentence is fragmented. It should be combined into a complete sentence with proper phrasing.

× 'Cause. When is you use new machine you should. Now about the machine.

✓ Because when you use a new machine, you should know about the machine.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and is fragmented. 'Is you' should be 'you', and 'Now' should be 'know'. The sentence needs to be complete and clear.