耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が途中で途切れており、文法的にも不完全です。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I am not a patient person because I get anxious when I have to wait for something important, like waiting for a reply from my boyfriend." のように答えると良いです。

示例: I am not a patient person because I often feel anxious when I have to wait, especially for important messages like replies from my boyfriend.

建议: 言葉の繰り返しや文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で正確な表現を心がけ、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"I feel impatient when my friends or boyfriend don't reply to my messages quickly because I worry about them." のように答えると良いです。

示例: I feel impatient when my friends or boyfriend don't reply to my messages quickly because I worry about them.

建议: 答えは理解できますが、文法と語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。より自然な表現を使い、理由や感情を詳しく説明しましょう。例えば、"I feel very tired and lose motivation when I have to do something for a long time because it becomes monotonous." のように答えると良いです。

示例: I feel very tired and lose motivation when I have to do something for a long time because it becomes monotonous.

建议: 答えが不明瞭で繰り返しが多いです。質問に直接答え、学生としての経験を具体的に述べましょう。例えば、"I am a student, and my studies require patience because I have to complete assignments and prepare for exams." のように答えると良いです。

示例: I am a student, and my studies require patience because I have to complete assignments and prepare for exams.

建议: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不十分です。比較を明確にし、具体的な理由や例を述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I think I am less patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities and less free time." のように答えると良いです。

示例: I think I am less patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities and less free time.

× Hmm, when I. Then I felt that I was not a patient person is when I was waiting for the reply from my boyfriend.

✓ Hmm, I felt that I was not a patient person when I was waiting for the reply from my boyfriend.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete, causing confusion. Combining the clauses into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When the when the when my friends or my boyfriend don't doesn't don't reply my message soon, I I think I feel me.

✓ When my friends or my boyfriend don't reply to my message soon, I think I feel impatient.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect pronoun usage ('feel me'). Also, 'reply' should be followed by 'to' when referring to messages. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I think I will feel very. Very tired and also I will not be motivated so good.

✓ I think I will feel very tired, and also I will not be motivated so well.

'So good' is incorrect; the adverb 'well' should be used to modify 'motivated'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs proper punctuation.

× My student activities require the patient to to be patient.

✓ My student activities require me to be patient.

The phrase 'require the patient to to be patient' is incorrect and redundant. The correct pronoun 'me' should be used to indicate who needs to be patient.

× I think I now I am less patient than than when I was a child.

✓ I think I am less patient now than when I was a child.

The sentence has repeated words and awkward word order. Correcting the order and removing repetition improves clarity and grammatical correctness.