耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但语言有些重复且语法错误，如“not the very patient person”应为“not a very patient person”，“make”应为“makes”。建议注意语法一致性，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I'm not a very patient person because I have a short temper. For example, when I have to wait in a long line, I often feel anxious and eager to get to the front quickly, which sometimes makes me frustrated.

建议: 回答内容具体且有例子，但“deadline is closed”表达不准确，应为“deadline is close”。另外，“quiet impatient”应为“quite impatient”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并适当使用连接词提升表达连贯性。

示例: I feel impatient when I have little time to finish my work. For instance, if I start a task late and the deadline is close, I get stressed and anxious, which makes it hard to concentrate.

建议: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，表达自然。建议在句子间使用更多连接词如“however”或“on the other hand”来增强逻辑性，同时注意时态一致性，如“had to fly”可改为“have to fly”。

示例: It depends on whether I enjoy the activity. For example, if I have to fly for about 10 hours to another country for travel, I don't mind because I'm excited. However, if I have to work for a long time, I usually feel anxious and tired.

建议: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误，如“job that require”应为“job that requires”，“high demanding work”应为“highly demanding work”，“concentrations”应为“concentration”。建议加强语法准确性，并尝试用更丰富的词汇表达。

示例: Actually, I'm a student, so I don't have a formal job that requires patience. However, when I complete homework like writing essays and data analysis, I need to be patient and focused because these tasks are highly demanding and require a lot of concentration and perseverance.

建议: 回答表达了对比，但时态使用不准确，如“don't have”应为“didn't have”。建议注意时态一致性，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I feel much calmer waiting in line because I can use my mobile phone to pass the time. However, when I was a child, I didn't have a phone, so I often felt anxious and bored while waiting.

× This impatience sometimes make me feel frustrated.

✓ This impatience sometimes makes me feel frustrated.

主语是单数名词"impatience"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，而不是复数形式"make"。

× if I start the task late and the deadline is closed, I get stressed and anxious and find it hard to concentrate.

✓ if I start the task late and the deadline is close, I get stressed and anxious and find it hard to concentrate.

形容词"close"用来表示截止日期临近，"closed"是过去分词，表示关闭状态，不适合此处。应使用"close"。

× This pressure for a limited time makes me feel quiet impatient.

✓ This pressure for a limited time makes me feel quite impatient.

副词"quite"拼写错误写成"quiet"，"quite"表示"相当"，用来修饰形容词"impatient"。

× if I had to fly out for about 10 hours to another country for traveling, I don't mind spending such time because I'm excited to travel.

✓ if I have to fly out for about 10 hours to another country for traveling, I don't mind spending such time because I'm excited to travel.

条件句中使用一般现在时表示习惯或事实，"if I had to"是虚拟语气，语境不符，应改为"if I have to"。

× I don't have a formal job that require patience.

✓ I don't have a formal job that requires patience.

先行词"job"是单数，关系代词引导的定语从句谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"requires"。

× those are high demanding work and demands a lot of concentrations and perseverance.

✓ those are highly demanding work and demand a lot of concentration and perseverance.

"work"是不可数名词，前面用复数指示代词"those"不合适，应改为单数或改用复数名词；"high demanding"应为副词修饰形容词"highly demanding"；"demands"应与主语一致改为"demand"；"concentrations"应为不可数名词"concentration"。

× But when I was a child, I don't have a phone, so I often feel anxious and bored while waiting.

✓ But when I was a child, I didn't have a phone, so I often felt anxious and bored while waiting.

时间状语从句中使用过去时态，主句也应使用过去时态，"don't have"应改为过去式"didn't have"，"feel"应改为过去式"felt"。