耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言较为自然，但存在重复和语法错误，且表达不够简洁。建议避免重复词汇，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

示例: I am patient in some situations, such as studying or taking important exams. However, when socializing, I tend to be less patient, especially if people are often late. So, it really depends on the context.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和句型，避免语法错误，并且逻辑要更连贯。

示例: I am a quick thinker and often have ideas immediately. Therefore, I feel impatient when others take a long time to come up with ideas or when they are frequently late.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，且有口头语。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的表达，并且句子结构更清晰。

示例: I find long tasks challenging because I am not very patient. However, if the task is important, I will focus and give it my full effort to complete it.

建议: 回答较为自然，但句子结构可以更紧凑，避免重复。建议使用更连贯的句子，并且增加连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, most jobs require patience. As a student, I need to concentrate for long periods when preparing for exams, regardless of the subject.

建议: 回答中时态混用且表达重复。建议注意时态一致，简化句子，避免重复表达。

示例: Certainly, as I have grown up, I have realized that many things require patience. Therefore, I am more patient now than I was as a child.

× I was patient to some certain things like when it comes to study or some important examination.

✓ I am patient with certain things like when it comes to studying or some important examinations.

这里时态使用错误。描述现在的习惯或状态时，应使用一般现在时。'was'是过去时，应该改为'am'。另外，'patient to'应改为'patient with'，'some certain'重复，改为'certain'即可。

× I was patient to some certain things like when it comes to study or some important examination.

✓ I am patient with certain things like when it comes to studying or some important examinations.

'patient'后面应接介词'with'，而不是'to'。

× I was patient to some certain things like when it comes to study or some important examination.

✓ I am patient with certain things like when it comes to studying or some important examinations.

'come to'后面应接动名词形式，故'study'应改为'studying'。

× I was patient to some certain things like when it comes to study or some important examination.

✓ I am patient with certain things like when it comes to studying or some important examinations.

'examination'应使用复数形式'examinations'，因为指的是多次考试。

× But when it comes to like socializing with some friends, I I cannot be very patient and I cannot tolerate that people always be late or something.

✓ But when it comes to socializing with some friends, I cannot be very patient and I cannot tolerate that people are always late or something.

'people always be late'中，'be'应改为现在时态'are'，以符合主语和时态。

× And in my opinion, I think I was a quick thinking person that I always come ideas in mind, so I could not bear that people need to take a long time to come up with an idea of the always be late or some certain situation like that.

✓ And in my opinion, I think I am a quick-thinking person who always has ideas in mind, so I cannot bear that people need to take a long time to come up with an idea or are always late or in some certain situations like that.

时态错误，描述现在的特质应使用一般现在时。'was'改为'am'，'come'改为'has'，'could not'改为'cannot'。另外，句子结构混乱，需调整。

× I think I was a quick thinking person that I always come ideas in mind

✓ I think I am a quick-thinking person who always has ideas in mind

'quick thinking'应连字符连接作形容词，且关系代词用'who'更合适。

× I always come ideas in mind

✓ I always have ideas in mind

动词'come'后不接'ideas in mind'，应使用'have ideas in mind'表达有想法。

× I could not bear that people need to take a long time to come up with an idea of the always be late or some certain situation like that.

✓ I cannot bear that people need to take a long time to come up with an idea or are always late or in some certain situations like that.

时态不一致，描述现在的感受应使用一般现在时，'could not'改为'cannot'。

× I could not bear that people need to take a long time to come up with an idea of the always be late or some certain situation like that.

✓ I cannot bear that people need to take a long time to come up with an idea or are always late or in some certain situations like that.

'come up with an idea of the always be late'结构不正确，应拆分并用'or'连接，'in some certain situations'更合适。

× Uh, I would feel that was a very difficult task for me because as you know, I'm that quite patient person, but if that matters is pretty crucial and I will definitely put 100% effort in it.

✓ Uh, I would feel that it is a very difficult task for me because, as you know, I'm not that patient a person, but if the matter is pretty crucial, I will definitely put 100% effort into it.

'that was'应为'it is'，'I'm that quite patient person'表达不当，应为'I'm not that patient a person'，'put effort in'应为'put effort into'。

× if that matters is pretty crucial

✓ if the matter is pretty crucial

'matters'应为单数'matter'，且前面应使用定冠词'the'。

× I will definitely put 100% effort in it.

✓ I will definitely put 100% effort into it.

动词短语'put effort'后应接介词'into'，而不是'in'。

× So I need to make up my mind and face this, uh, serious situation.

✓ So I need to make up my mind and face this serious situation.

句中逗号和'uh'为口语填充词，书面语中应去除。

× Yeah, I think most of the jobs that require you to be patient.

✓ Yeah, I think most jobs require you to be patient.

'most of the jobs that require'结构冗余，简化为'most jobs require'更自然。

× For me as a student, I need to pay attention and focus for a long time if I need to prepare for a certain exam, no matter what subject it is.

✓ For me as a student, I need to pay attention and focus for a long time if I need to prepare for a certain exam, no matter what subject it is.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× Certainly when you grow up and you were aware of that, a lot of things that require patience and you could not just rush and get a good resource.

✓ Certainly when you grow up and you are aware of that, a lot of things require patience and you cannot just rush and get good resources.

'were aware'应为现在时态'are aware'，'could not'改为'cannot'，'resource'应为复数'resources'。

× get a good resource

✓ get good resources

'resource'应使用复数形式，且不需要冠词'a'。

× So that's why you grow older and become more patient and that's why I am more patient than I was, I was used to be.

✓ So that's why you grow older and become more patient, and that's why I am more patient than I used to be.

'I was, I was used to be'重复且错误，应为'I used to be'。