耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词使表达更连贯。

示例: I think my patience depends on the situation. For example, if I explain something twice and the person still doesn't understand, I might try a few more times. However, if they still can't understand after many attempts, I consider myself not very patient.

建议: 回答内容不具体，表达不清晰，缺少连贯性。建议直接说明让你不耐烦的具体原因，并用连词连接句子。

示例: I feel impatient when people show anger during communication. For instance, if someone shouts or uses harsh words, it makes me uncomfortable and less patient.

建议: 回答表达不够流畅，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子。

示例: It depends on the task and how long it takes. For example, reading a book for a week is fine, but learning a new skill until I fully understand it can be frustrating.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不够清晰。建议简化句子，直接说明工作中需要耐心的具体情境。

示例: Although I am a student now, I had a part-time job where I needed to be patient. For example, when I called customers, some of them did not return my calls promptly, so I had to wait patiently.

建议: 回答较为完整但表达重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连词使表达更流畅。

示例: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. As an adult, I can control my emotions better and understand when it is important to be patient.

× if sometimes that I told, maybe I told up to a person maybe just two times only and he cannot understand

✓ if sometimes I told a person maybe just two times only and he cannot understand

这里的'sometimes that I told'结构不正确，应该去掉'that'，并且'told'后面需要接宾语，改为'told a person'。此外，'maybe I told up to a person'表达不自然，改为'maybe I told a person'。

× But if I took 100 times he also cannot understand.

✓ But if I told him 100 times, he still cannot understand.

这里'took 100 times'用词错误，应该用'told him 100 times'表示告诉某人100次。

× Maybe I feel he or she the emotion because, uh, in some kind of communication, you can feel their emotions.

✓ Maybe I feel his or her emotion because, uh, in some kinds of communication, you can feel their emotions.

'he or she the emotion'结构错误，应该用'feel his or her emotion'。另外，'some kind of communication'复数时应为'some kinds of communication'。

× Maybe he may feel angry and you can see that he may shout the words.

✓ Maybe he feels angry and you can see that he may shout words.

'he may feel'重复了情态动词'may'，应简化为'he feels'。'shout the words'中'the'不必要，改为'shout words'更自然。

× I think I cannot really happy.

✓ I think I cannot really be happy.

'cannot really happy'缺少动词，'happy'是形容词，前面需要加动词'be'。

× I have done a one part time job and in that job I think I have to be patient for calling the telephone

✓ I have done a part-time job and in that job I think I have to be patient when calling on the telephone

'a one part time job'中'one'多余，且'part time'应连写为'part-time'。'patient for calling the telephone'表达不当，改为'patient when calling on the telephone'更合适。

× because some of them they are they do not have natural time to call back my telephone.

✓ because some of them do not have enough time to call me back.

'some of them they are they do not have'重复主语，应该简化为'some of them do not have'。'natural time'用词错误，应为'enough time'。'call back my telephone'表达不自然，改为'call me back'。

× Therefore, I think I am more patient than when I was children.

✓ Therefore, I think I am more patient than when I was a child.

'when I was children'主语单复数不一致，'I'是单数，应该用'singular'形式'a child'。