耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific examples. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I often help my friends and family when they struggle with their work or studies. For instance, I spend time explaining difficult concepts to them without getting frustrated.

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more concise. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

示例: There are a few things that make me impatient, but mainly I find it hard to wait for my exam results. After taking an exam, I feel anxious and eager to know my scores as soon as possible.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more coherent. Also, watch for minor grammatical errors.

示例: Since I am a patient person, I usually don't feel stressed or anxious when I have to work on important tasks for a long time. In fact, I find that staying focused helps me complete them efficiently.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Make sure to form complete sentences and provide specific details about your job and why patience is necessary.

示例: Yes, my job as a lawyer requires a lot of patience because I work with clients who have faced unfair treatment throughout their lives. I need to listen carefully and handle their cases thoughtfully.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to show contrast between past and present. Avoid ending sentences abruptly.

示例: When I was a child, I was quite impatient and disliked waiting for others. However, now I am much more patient and can stay calm when facing difficulties.

× Yes, I believe I am a quite patient person because I always help my friends and family members when they face difficulties with their works or studies it means they require.

✓ Yes, I believe I am quite a patient person because I always help my friends and family members when they face difficulties with their work or studies, which means they need help.

The phrase 'a quite patient person' is incorrect; the correct order is 'quite a patient person' (Grammar problem type 18). Also, 'works' should be 'work' because 'work' in this context is an uncountable noun (Grammar problem type 14). The sentence was also run-on and needed punctuation and clarification for better understanding.

× Well, from my perspective and there are few things which make me impatient, but there is one thing I can't wait for so long.

✓ Well, from my perspective, there are a few things that make me impatient, but there is one thing I can't wait for very long.

The original sentence has a conjunction 'and' that disrupts sentence flow and lacks an article before 'few things'. 'A few' is the correct quantifier here (Grammar problem type 14). Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses. The phrase 'wait for so long' is better expressed as 'wait for very long' for naturalness.

× When I take exam, I cannot wait for a long time.

✓ When I take an exam, I cannot wait for a long time.

The noun 'exam' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it (Grammar problem type 22). The rest of the sentence is correct in present tense.

× Well, as I'm a patient person, I don't feel stressed or anxious while doing something important things for a long time.

✓ Well, as I'm a patient person, I don't feel stressed or anxious while doing important things for a long time.

The phrase 'something important things' is incorrect because 'something' is singular and 'things' is plural; they cannot be used together. The correct phrase is 'important things' (Grammar problem type 13).

× Well, to be honest, yes, my job requires to be patient because as I'm a lawyer, I need work with people who face unfavored rights during their lifetime.

✓ Well, to be honest, yes, my job requires me to be patient because, as I'm a lawyer, I need to work with people who face unfair treatment during their lifetime.

The verb 'requires' should be followed by an object and an infinitive: 'requires me to be patient' (Grammar problem type 12). Also, 'need work' should be 'need to work'. The phrase 'unfavored rights' is incorrect; 'unfair treatment' is more appropriate.

× Well, when I was young, I didn't like to wait for a long time someone and I was quite an impatient person.

✓ Well, when I was young, I didn't like to wait for someone for a long time, and I was quite an impatient person.

The phrase 'wait for a long time someone' has incorrect word order; the correct order is 'wait for someone for a long time' (Grammar problem type 26). The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense.

× Now I come down when I face difficulties and I.

✓ Now I calm down when I face difficulties.

The phrase 'I come down' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I calm down'. The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and I.' which should be removed for clarity (Grammar problem type 26).