耐心— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
Yes, I am, though I was not after my kids were born. I become more patient than before, since, as you may know, kids always requires a lot of patience.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
When someone's time is out, I will become impatient. For example, if we have to go out at 8:00 but my daughter is still have has her breakfast, when on 750 I will become impatient.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
In most of times I may feel difficult to start, but once I started I will try my best to concentrate and usually I do this kind of things well.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Oh yes, of course. I think every kind of job requires patience. My job as an application designer, sometimes it can be really difficult and sophisticated. Therefore a lot of patience is required.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Yes, of course. I think most people are more patient than when they were young since children are really difficult to get concentrated for a long time. But my daughter is more patient than I when I was a kid.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答时语法有误，如时态和单复数错误。建议注意时态一致性和主谓一致，避免语法错误。
示例: Yes, I am, although I was not very patient before my kids were born. I have become more patient since children require a lot of patience.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且时间表达混乱。建议理清时间表达，使用正确语法，并使句子更连贯。
示例: I feel impatient when someone is late. For example, if we need to leave at 8:00 but my daughter is still having breakfast at 7:50, I start to feel impatient.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意动词时态和单复数。
示例: Most of the time, I find it difficult to start, but once I begin, I try my best to concentrate and usually do well with such tasks.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分数: 80.0建议: 回答较好，但句子连接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅自然。
示例: Oh yes, of course. I believe every job requires patience. As an application designer, my work can sometimes be really difficult and sophisticated, so a lot of patience is necessary.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答中表达不够准确，句子结构有待改进。建议简化句子结构，避免复杂表达，提升清晰度。
示例: Yes, of course. I think most people become more patient as they grow up because children find it hard to concentrate for a long time. However, my daughter is more patient than I was at her age.
语法
× kids always requires a lot of patience.
✓ kids always require a lot of patience.
这里的主语是复数形式“kids”，谓语动词应该用复数形式“require”，而不是单数形式“requires”。
× if we have to go out at 8:00 but my daughter is still have has her breakfast, when on 750 I will become impatient.
✓ if we have to go out at 8:00 but my daughter is still having her breakfast, when on 7:50 I will become impatient.
“have”应改为现在进行时“having”，表示动作正在进行中。此外，“has”是多余的，应删除。时间“750”应改为“7:50”，符合时间表达习惯。
× In most of times I may feel difficult to start, but once I started I will try my best to concentrate and usually I do this kind of things well.
✓ Most of the time I may feel it difficult to start, but once I start I will try my best to concentrate and usually I do these kinds of things well.
“most of times”应改为“most of the time”，表示大多数时候。“feel difficult”应加“it”作形式宾语。动词时态应保持一致，“started”改为“start”。“this kind of things”应改为“these kinds of things”，保持数量一致。
× My job as an application designer, sometimes it can be really difficult and sophisticated.
✓ My job as an application designer is sometimes really difficult and sophisticated.
原句缺少谓语动词，应加上“is”使句子完整。
× But my daughter is more patient than I when I was a kid.
✓ But my daughter is more patient than I was when I was a kid.
比较结构中省略了“was”，应补充完整，保持句子结构正确。
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