耐心— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
To be honest, I am really patient person almost every time. I try to be calm and patient when I am angry and upset and I try not to shout or scream and it helps me to be a good person.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
When someone do something unfairly or treat someone unfairly I it makes me feel impatient and in this case I always am upset but I try to be calm and patient.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
Sometimes when I have to do something for a long time, I feel impatient and stressful. It's stressful for me. I feel nervous, but I try to stay calm and not to be angry.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
My job really requires me to be patient because I am a teacher. Sometimes my student, my students behavior feels me angry and upset but I still stay calm and patient and I try not to be.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
I'm really more patient now than I was a child because now can I can manage my emotions and stay calm whether I feel upset and angry. And when I was a child I cannot stay calm.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分数: 75.0建议: თქვენი პასუხი ბუნებრივია, მაგრამ საჭიროა გაუმჯობესება გრამატიკაში და სტრუქტურაში. გამოიყენეთ სწორი წინადადების ფორმები და შეამცირეთ განმეორებები, რათა პასუხი უფრო ეფექტური და მკაფიო გახდეს.
示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person most of the time. When I feel angry or upset, I try to stay calm and avoid shouting, which helps me maintain good relationships with others.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分数: 70.0建议: თქვენი პასუხი შეიცავს გრამატიკულ შეცდომებს და სიტყვების არასწორ გამოყენებას. გამოიყენეთ სწორი დრო და ფორმები, ასევე დაამატეთ ლოგიკური კავშირი, რათა პასუხი უფრო გასაგები იყოს.
示例: I feel impatient when someone acts unfairly or treats others unjustly. In such situations, I usually get upset, but I try to remain calm and patient.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分数: 72.0建议: თქვენი პასუხი შეიცავს განმეორებებს და გრამატიკულ შეცდომებს. შეეცადეთ გამოიყენოთ მრავალფეროვანი სიტყვები და შეაერთოთ წინადადებები ლოგიკური კავშირებით, რათა პასუხი უფრო ბუნებრივი და ეფექტური გახდეს.
示例: Sometimes, when I have to do a task for a long time, I feel impatient and stressed. However, I try to stay calm and avoid getting angry.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分数: 68.0建议: თქვენი პასუხი შეიცავს გრამატიკულ შეცდომებს და სიტყვების არასწორ გამოყენებას. გამოიყენეთ სწორი წინადადების სტრუქტურა და გამოთქვით აზრი უფრო მკაფიოდ და ბუნებრივად.
示例: Yes, my job as a teacher requires a lot of patience. Sometimes, my students' behavior makes me feel angry and upset, but I always try to remain calm and patient.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分数: 70.0建议: თქვენი პასუხი შეიცავს გრამატიკულ შეცდომებს და წინადადებების არასწორ ფორმირებას. გამოიყენეთ სწორი დრო და სტრუქტურა, რათა პასუხი იყოს ბუნებრივი და გასაგები.
示例: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because I can manage my emotions better and stay calm even when I feel upset or angry. As a child, I found it difficult to stay calm.
语法
× When someone do something unfairly or treat someone unfairly I it makes me feel impatient and in this case I always am upset but I try to be calm and patient.
✓ When someone does something unfairly or treats someone unfairly, it makes me feel impatient and in this case I am always upset but I try to be calm and patient.
The subject 'someone' is singular, so the verbs 'do' and 'treat' should be in the third person singular form 'does' and 'treats'. Also, 'I it makes me' is incorrect; 'it makes me' is correct. The word order 'I always am upset' is better as 'I am always upset' for natural English.
× My job really requires me to be patient because I am a teacher. Sometimes my student, my students behavior feels me angry and upset but I still stay calm and patient and I try not to be.
✓ My job really requires me to be patient because I am a teacher. Sometimes my students' behavior makes me angry and upset but I still stay calm and patient and I try not to be.
The phrase 'my student, my students behavior' is incorrect; it should be 'my students' behavior' to show possession and plural. The verb 'feels me angry' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'makes me angry'.
× I'm really more patient now than I was a child because now can I can manage my emotions and stay calm whether I feel upset and angry. And when I was a child I cannot stay calm.
✓ I'm really more patient now than I was as a child because now I can manage my emotions and stay calm whether I feel upset or angry. And when I was a child, I could not stay calm.
The phrase 'than I was a child' should be 'than I was as a child' to be grammatically correct. The sentence 'now can I can manage' has a word order error; it should be 'now I can manage'. The phrase 'whether I feel upset and angry' is better as 'whether I feel upset or angry'. The phrase 'I cannot stay calm' in past context should be 'I could not stay calm' to match past tense.
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