耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "get angry for on the children." To improve, focus on using correct prepositions and smoother phrasing. Also, try to avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas unnecessarily.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a very patient person because I can wait for hours for anyone, and I rarely get angry, even with children.

建议: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by combining sentences to avoid fragments and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition, such as using synonyms for "impatient" and "tells me."

示例: I am usually very patient, but I start to feel impatient when someone repeatedly asks me to do something because it irritates me to hear the same request over and over.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, with good use of examples. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to make your response smoother and more natural. Also, avoid repeating words like "very very."

示例: It depends on the task. For instance, I don't mind driving for several hours, but standing in a long queue for an extended period tends to make me a bit impatient.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "a lot of time." To improve, use correct expressions and add linking words to enhance coherence. Also, try to provide more specific details about how patience is required in your job.

示例: Yes, my job as a salesperson requires a great deal of patience because I often interact with noisy customers, and I need to remain calm and professional throughout.

建议: Your answer conveys the idea but is somewhat confusing due to repetition and grammatical mistakes. To improve, organize your thoughts clearly, avoid repeating phrases, and use correct prepositions. Adding linking words will also help the flow of your response.

示例: Definitely, I am much more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I would get angry over small things, like not having dinner on time, but now I handle such situations calmly.

× I can wait for hours for anybody and also I very rarely get angry for on the children.

✓ I can wait for hours for anybody and also I very rarely get angry at the children.

The preposition 'for on' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to express anger directed towards someone is 'angry at'. Therefore, 'angry for on the children' should be corrected to 'angry at the children'.

× I am normally very very patient person, but if someone tells me to do things quite a lot of times then I might get a little impatient.

✓ I am normally a very very patient person, but if someone tells me to do things quite a lot of times then I might get a little impatient.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very very patient person'. This is necessary because 'person' is a singular countable noun and requires an article or determiner.

× Because it irritates me when someone tells me the same thing over and over.

✓ Because it irritates me when someone tells me the same thing over and over again.

The phrase 'over and over' is commonly followed by 'again' to complete the expression meaning repeatedly. Adding 'again' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× Well, it depends on the job that I need to do for the long time.

✓ Well, it depends on the job that I need to do for a long time.

The phrase 'for the long time' is incorrect because 'long time' is a general duration and should be preceded by the indefinite article 'a' instead of the definite article 'the'.

× But if I have to stand in a line for a very very long time, I might get a little impatient with it.

✓ But if I have to stand in a line for a very very long time, I might get a little impatient about it.

The phrase 'impatient with it' is less common; 'impatient about it' is more appropriate when referring to feelings about a situation or task.

× I usually deal with some customers that can be noisy sometimes, so it requires me to be patient a lot of time.

✓ I usually deal with some customers that can be noisy sometimes, so it requires me to be patient a lot of the time.

The phrase 'a lot of time' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'a lot of the time' to indicate frequency or duration.

× Well, definitely I'm a lot of I have a lot of patience now and then when I then I had when I used to be a child.

✓ Well, definitely I have a lot more patience now than I had when I was a child.

The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant phrases. The corrected sentence simplifies the structure and uses the comparative form 'a lot more patience' and the correct comparison 'now than I had when I was a child'.

× When I was a child, I used to get angry on small little things, like if I don't even get a dinner on time, I'll get angry with my mom.

✓ When I was a child, I used to get angry about small little things, like if I didn't even get dinner on time, I'd get angry with my mom.

The preposition 'angry on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'angry about'. Also, 'don't' should be in past tense 'didn't' to match the past context, and 'a dinner' should be 'dinner' as it is an uncountable noun here. 'I'll' should be 'I'd' to maintain past conditional tense.