耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、"I consider my a patient person"は正しくは"I consider myself a patient person"です。また、冗長な表現や繰り返しが見られます。より簡潔で自然な表現を心がけ、文法の正確さを向上させましょう。

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I have worked in agriculture, which requires hard work and perseverance. Although the job can be physically demanding and stressful, I feel proud of my efforts.

× Yes, I consider my a patient person because I I work.

✓ Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I work.

The phrase 'my a patient person' is incorrect; 'my' should be replaced with the reflexive pronoun 'myself' to correctly refer back to the subject. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error. The correct sentence uses 'myself' to indicate the speaker's self-assessment.

× although this job can be a physically demanding and sometimes stressful, I feel proud working.

✓ although this job can be physically demanding and sometimes stressful, I feel proud working.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'physically demanding' which is an adjective phrase. Since 'physically demanding' describes the job in general, the article 'a' should be omitted.

× especially when it's rainy day.

✓ especially when it's a rainy day.

The noun 'day' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× which effects my mood because of this.

✓ which affects my mood because of this.

The verb 'effects' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'affects' meaning 'to influence'. 'Effects' is a noun or means 'to bring about' which is not appropriate here.

× I feel uncomfortable and stressed and negative.

✓ I feel uncomfortable, stressed, and negative.

The sentence lists adjectives describing feelings; commas should separate them for clarity and correct grammar.

× For example, for a long time study makes me feel pressure on the patient but.

✓ For example, studying for a long time makes me feel pressure, but I try to be patient.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'For a long time study' is awkward; 'studying for a long time' is correct. The phrase 'pressure on the patient' is incorrect; it should be 'pressure'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× My job require me to be patient because I have worked in agriculture.

✓ My job requires me to be patient because I have worked in agriculture.

The subject 'job' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires' to agree in number.

× My work require a lot of patient.

✓ My work requires a lot of patience.

'Work' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires'. Also, 'patient' is an adjective or noun meaning a person receiving medical care; the correct noun here is 'patience' meaning the ability to wait calmly.

× For example my job is affected by weather conditions so I worked in range.

✓ For example, my job is affected by weather conditions, so I work outdoors.

The phrase 'I worked in range' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'Work outdoors' or 'work in the field' is more appropriate. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× Yes, I am more patient person because when I was a child I wasn't a patient person but now my work in agriculture change me strong.

✓ Yes, I am a more patient person because when I was a child I wasn't patient, but now my work in agriculture has made me stronger.

The article 'a' is missing before 'more patient person'. 'Change me strong' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'has made me stronger' using the present perfect tense and comparative adjective.

× For example, my work require a lot of people.

✓ For example, my work requires a lot of patience.

The original sentence likely intended to say 'patience' not 'people'. Also, 'work' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires'.