耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够完整且表达不够自然。建议回答时直接表达观点，避免犹豫词汇，并补充具体例子使内容更丰富。

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I remain calm in stressful situations. For example, when my friends are upset, I listen carefully and try to understand their feelings.

建议: 语法和时态使用不准确，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I rarely feel impatient, but sometimes I get frustrated when I am stuck in traffic jams because it wastes my valuable time and makes me feel isolated.

建议: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

示例: I usually feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time. For instance, if a friend makes me wait and arrives late, I might feel annoyed.

建议: 句子结构不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并说明原因和具体情况。

示例: Yes, as a student, I need to be patient when doing homework. If I find some questions difficult, I don't give up and keep trying until I understand them.

建议: 表达不清楚且有语法错误，内容重复。建议简洁表达对比，并用具体例子说明变化。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Before, I often lost my temper and argued with my family, but now I try to stay calm and understand others.

× I'm very confident to say that I'm a patient person because many of my friends all think me very calm and understanding.

✓ I'm very confident to say that I'm a patient person because many of my friends all think I am very calm and understanding.

这里'me'用作宾语不正确，应该用主格'I'，因为它是think的主语补语。

× sometimes I feel impatient when I was waiting the traffic jam.

✓ sometimes I feel impatient when I am waiting in a traffic jam.

这里时态不一致，前半句是一般现在时，后半句不应使用过去时'was waiting'，应使用现在进行时'am waiting'。

× when I was waiting the traffic jam.

✓ when I was waiting in a traffic jam.

动词wait后应接介词'in'表示处于某种状态，不能直接接'traffic jam'。

× I think it waste my valuable time and I was very alone.

✓ I think it wastes my valuable time and I feel very alone.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s变为wastes；'was very alone'表达不自然，改为'feel very alone'更符合语境。

× when a friend shoot me wait her for a long time and she didn't arrive on time, I could be angry.

✓ when a friend makes me wait for her for a long time and she doesn't arrive on time, I can be angry.

动词短语应为'make sb. do sth.'，'shoot me wait her'不正确；'wait'后应加介词'for'；时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时。

× I could be angry.

✓ I can be angry.

这里表达一般可能性，使用情态动词'can'更合适，'could'表示过去或假设情况。

× as a student we should be patient on my homework when I have difficulty in in questions I didn't give up and I should be more pay more attention on it till.

✓ As a student, we should be patient with our homework. When I have difficulty with questions, I don't give up and I should pay more attention to them until I understand.

'patient'后应接介词'with'；'difficulty in in questions'重复且介词用错，应为'difficulty with questions'；'pay more attention on'应为'pay more attention to'；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整时态。

× When I was a child, I always destroyed by my mood, especially impatient.

✓ When I was a child, I was always controlled by my mood, especially impatience.

'destroyed by my mood'用词不当，应为'controlled by my mood'；'impatient'是形容词，句中应使用名词'impatience'。

× I was so impatient that I often agreed with my family and friends.

✓ I was so impatient that I often argued with my family and friends.

'agreed with'意思是同意，与上下文表达的冲突相反，应改为'argued with'表示争吵。