耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は直接的で良いですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I study about.」は不完全な文であり、また「finally get full mark on the test」は「I finally got full marks on the test」のように過去形と複数形を使うべきです。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文法を正し、具体的な詳細を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I am a patient person because I can study for long hours at university. For example, I studied mathematics with my friend for several weeks, and I finally got full marks on the test.

建议: 「a lot of works」は不自然で、「a lot of work」または「many tasks」が適切です。また、「make me stress」は文法的に誤りで、「make me stressed」や「stress me out」が正しい表現です。より自然な表現を使い、具体的な理由を明確に述べることが重要です。

示例: Having a lot of work makes me impatient. For example, at university, I have to solve many mathematics and physics problems, which always stress me out.

建议: 回答は比較的良いですが、「take a regular exercise」は不自然で、「do regular exercise」や「exercise regularly」が適切です。また、接続詞「so」を使って理由と結果をつなげている点は良いです。より自然な表現に修正しましょう。

示例: When I have to do something for a long time, I tend to feel stressed out, so I always make a list and exercise regularly to reduce my stress.

建议: 「my job related to memorizing a lot of tasks」は文法的に誤りで、「my job is related to memorizing many tasks」や「my job involves memorizing many tasks」が正しいです。また、「memorize many words in my work」も具体的に説明するとより良いです。

示例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because it involves memorizing many tasks. For example, I have to memorize many words related to my work, which takes a lot of time.

建议: 「I now able to do a lot of tasks」は文法的に誤りで、「I am now able to do many tasks」が正しいです。また、「improved my skill」よりも「improved my skills」と複数形にするのが自然です。より正確な文法を使いましょう。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have done many tasks and improved my skills. As a result, I am now able to handle many tasks.

× I study mathematics for a long time with my friend and finally get full mark on the test.

✓ I studied mathematics for a long time with my friend and finally got full marks on the test.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Study' should be 'studied' and 'get' should be 'got'. Also, 'full mark' should be pluralized to 'full marks' as it is a common expression.

× A lot of works make me impatient.

✓ A lot of work makes me impatient.

The noun 'work' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'works' in this context. Also, 'a lot of' with uncountable nouns takes a singular verb, so 'make' should be 'makes'.

× These activities always make me stress.

✓ These activities always make me stressed.

The verb 'make' is followed by an object plus an adjective, not a verb. 'Stress' is a noun or verb, but here the adjective 'stressed' is correct to describe the feeling caused by the activities.

× I always make a list and take a regular exercise to reduce my stress.

✓ I always make a list and do regular exercise to reduce my stress.

The verb 'take' is not commonly used with 'exercise' in this context. The correct verb is 'do' when referring to exercise in general.

× my job related to memorizing a lot of tasks.

✓ my job is related to memorizing a lot of tasks.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to connect the subject and the complement. 'Related to' requires a form of 'be' before it.

× I have done a lot of tasks and improved my skill.

✓ I have done a lot of tasks and improved my skills.

The word 'skill' should be pluralized to 'skills' because it refers to multiple abilities improved over time.

× As a result, I now able to do a lot of tasks.

✓ As a result, I am now able to do a lot of tasks.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the correct present tense structure 'I am able'.