耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了耐心的概念，但语法和用词不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意动词形式和句子连贯性。

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can listen to others' opinions for a long time. For example, last week my friend talked about her boyfriend for three hours, and I listened patiently.

建议: 回答中多次出现词汇错误，如'infectious'用错，且句子结构不清晰。建议使用正确词汇表达不耐烦的原因，并注意句子连贯。

示例: Two things make me feel impatient. First, when someone cries or shouts loudly, it makes me feel uncomfortable. Second, when someone repeats the same thing many times, I get annoyed.

建议: 回答中存在词汇和语法错误，如'Hua Sing'和'impassioned'用法不当。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并注意词汇准确。

示例: It depends on the task. If I like it, I don't feel tired and enjoy doing it for a long time. But if I don't like it, I feel unhappy and impatient.

建议: 回答表达了耐心的重要性，但句子不够流畅，且有语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意语法正确。

示例: I am a PhD student, so my job requires a lot of patience. For example, I often need to answer research questions repeatedly. Also, fixing bugs in my research takes a long time, so patience is essential.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，且有语法和词汇错误。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达成长带来的耐心变化。

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Growing up, I have faced many challenges, such as reading long books and studying hard, which have helped me become more patient.

× I can listening to anyone's analysis or some idea for a long time.

✓ I can listen to anyone's analysis or some idea for a long time.

这里的情态动词 can 后面应该接动词原形 listen，而不是动名词 listening。

× For instance, last week my friend told me about his boyfriend Douhua to her for the three hours and I am a patient audition for.

✓ For instance, last week my friend talked to me about her boyfriend Douhua for three hours, and I was patient during the conversation.

句子结构混乱，表达不清。应调整为“朋友和我谈论她的男朋友，持续了三小时，我很有耐心”。

× There are two things that will make me feel infectious.

✓ There are two things that will make me feel impatient.

单词 infectious（传染的）用错，应为 impatient（不耐烦的）。

× First is someone is crying or shouting loudly that will make my ear feel a nervous and feel uncomfortable

✓ First is when someone is crying or shouting loudly, it makes my ears feel nervous and uncomfortable.

形容词 nervous 用法错误，应修饰人而非耳朵，且句子结构需调整。

× and the second is someone say the same thing repeat for many times it will make me feel infectious to him or her.

✓ and the second is when someone says the same thing repeatedly many times, it makes me feel impatient with him or her.

动词 say 应为第三人称单数 says；repeat 应用副词 repeatedly；介词用法错误，应为 feel impatient with。

× If The thing is I like and I love it, I won't be impassioned and I'll love to do it for a long time.

✓ If the thing is something I like and love, I won't be impatient and I'll love to do it for a long time.

单词 impassioned（充满激情的）用错，应为 impatient（不耐烦的）。

× But if this thing is not my love or I'm unwilling to do it, I will feel unhappy and a little bit impatient for it.

✓ But if this thing is not what I love or I'm unwilling to do it, I will feel unhappy and a little bit impatient about it.

短语用法错误，应为 feel impatient about sth。

× someone may ask you some research question and you need to many times.

✓ someone may ask you some research questions and you need to answer many times.

research question 应为复数 questions；句子缺少动词 answer。

× And on the other hand, when you're doing research, there are some bug you need to fix it and it needs a long time.

✓ And on the other hand, when you're doing research, there are some bugs you need to fix, and it takes a long time.

bug 应为复数 bugs；句子中 fix 后不应加 it；动词时态和搭配需调整。

× Since I grow up, I undergo many different things that make me feel patient.

✓ Since I grew up, I have undergone many different things that have made me more patient.

时态错误，grow 应用过去式 grew；undergo 需用完成时态；表达更自然。

× For instance, that I need to have many kinds of texts and I need to read a book for a long time.

✓ For instance, I need to read many kinds of texts and read books for a long time.

表达不完整且重复，调整为更自然的表达。

× It made me more precious, really.

✓ It made me more patient, really.

precious（珍贵的）用错，应为 patient（有耐心的）。