耐心— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
Yes I could say I am a patient man but I used to be very easily angry and lack of patience. I always get annoyed when something don't go go went well as I imagined.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
Ah, I think when things go, uh, goes not asthma. I want it. I I'm easily, I'm easily impatient.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
It is nice job. It is not a nice job for us to insist on something for a long time. To be honest, I sometimes I will feel annoyed, but I will persuade myself to persist on persist. I think it is not a good habit to give up something.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Oh yes, as a full time student and especially my major is law, it requires a lot of patience to when I searching for some, when I searching for some cases and I need to find the details in thousands, thousands, thousands of and hundreds of words.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Of course, I am definitely more patient now than I was a child. When I was younger, I often get angry and frustrated easily, especially when I didn't get what I wanted or my parents refused refused me. However, as I grow older, I have learned to control my emotions better and understand a situation or clearly.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和主谓一致。
示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person now, although I used to get angry easily when things didn't go as I expected.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分数: 30.0建议: 回答不完整且含糊，存在语音错误和语法问题。建议明确表达原因，使用完整句子，并避免口头语。
示例: I feel impatient when things don't happen as quickly as I want, especially if I have to wait for a long time.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分数: 50.0建议: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，重复用词。建议使用更简洁的句子，清楚表达感受，并使用连接词使表达连贯。
示例: Doing something for a long time can be tiring, and sometimes I feel annoyed. However, I try to encourage myself to keep going because giving up is not a good habit.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法，避免重复，并具体说明耐心的原因。
示例: Yes, as a full-time law student, I need a lot of patience when searching through thousands of words in legal cases to find important details.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答内容较好，但存在语法错误和重复。建议注意时态一致，避免重复，并使句子更简洁自然。
示例: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to get angry easily, especially when I didn't get what I wanted, but now I can control my emotions and understand situations more clearly.
语法
× I always get annoyed when something don't go go went well as I imagined.
✓ I always get annoyed when something doesn't go as well as I imagined.
这里的主语是单数'something'，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式'doesn't'，而不是复数形式'don't'。另外，'go go went'是重复且时态错误，应改为'go'。
× Ah, I think when things go, uh, goes not asthma.
✓ Ah, I think when things go, uh, not as I want.
主语'things'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'go'，而不是单数形式'goes'。句子中'not asthma'不通，应改为'not as I want'或类似表达。
× I will persuade myself to persist on persist.
✓ I will persuade myself to persist.
动词'persist'后不需要介词'on'，直接使用不定式形式即可。
× it requires a lot of patience to when I searching for some, when I searching for some cases and I need to find the details in thousands, thousands, thousands of and hundreds of words.
✓ it requires a lot of patience when I search for some cases and I need to find the details in thousands and hundreds of words.
'to when'结构错误，应去掉'to'。'searching'应改为一般现在时'search'以符合句子时态。'thousands, thousands, thousands of and hundreds of words'重复且结构混乱，应简化为'thousands and hundreds of words'。
× I often get angry and frustrated easily, especially when I didn't get what I wanted or my parents refused refused me.
✓ I often got angry and frustrated easily, especially when I didn't get what I wanted or my parents refused me.
句子描述过去的情况，动词时态应一致，'get'应改为过去式'got'。'refused refused'重复，应去掉一个。
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