耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to give a direct and clear response with simple, correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and focus on coherence.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. Many of my friends say that I am a good listener because I always wait calmly when they share their problems.

建议: Your answer has repetition and unclear expressions. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, use correct grammar and vocabulary to express impatience clearly.

示例: There are several things that make me feel impatient. For example, when I am in a hurry and have to wait in a long queue, especially for the bathroom, I feel very impatient.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting details using correct sentence structures and linking words.

示例: I feel bored and exhausted when I have to do repetitive tasks for a long time. Therefore, I usually try to take breaks to stay focused and comfortable.

建议: Your answer has grammar mistakes and is not very clear. Try to use correct verb forms and organize your ideas logically with linking words to explain why your job requires patience.

示例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because many people ask me numerous questions. Sometimes, I have to give the same answers repeatedly, which needs patience.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct comparison between your patience now and as a child, and explain the reason clearly using simple sentences.

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because my parents taught me how to control my emotions and be calm in difficult situations.

× My many of my friends always said that I'm a good listener because they're raised and I'm always waiting for their conversation and difficulty.

✓ Many of my friends always say that I'm a good listener because they are raised and I'm always waiting for their conversation and difficulty.

The phrase 'My many of my friends' is incorrect; 'Many of my friends' is correct. Also, 'said' should be 'say' to match the present tense context. 'They're' should be 'they are' for clarity. The sentence has plural subject 'friends' so verbs should be plural or base form accordingly.

× Well, there were several things that makes me uncomfortable, uncomfortable and impatient.

✓ Well, there were several things that make me uncomfortable and impatient.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'things' which is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes' to agree with the plural subject.

× So it's a really impatient.

✓ So I feel really impatient.

'Impatient' is an adjective describing a person, not a thing. 'It's a really impatient' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I feel really impatient' to express the feeling.

× Yes, of course my job always require a lot of patience because I many people always need a lot of questions to me and sometimes I get I I need to give give a repetitive answers to them.

✓ Yes, of course my job always requires a lot of patience because many people always have a lot of questions for me and sometimes I need to give repetitive answers to them.

'Require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular subject 'my job'. 'I many people' is incorrect; 'many people' is correct without 'I'. 'Need a lot of questions to me' should be 'have a lot of questions for me'. 'Give give a repetitive answers' should be 'give repetitive answers'.

× Well, yes, I am quite a patient nowadays before rather than rather than a kid, because my parents, my parents used to learn about used to learn about how to how to write action to the in the.

✓ Well, yes, I am quite patient nowadays compared to when I was a kid, because my parents used to teach me how to react in situations.

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'Nowadays before' is contradictory; 'nowadays compared to when I was a kid' is correct. 'Used to learn about' is incorrect; parents 'used to teach' is correct. 'Write action to the in the' is unclear; corrected to 'how to react in situations' for clarity.