耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et manque de clarté. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques. Évitez les hésitations et les phrases incomplètes pour paraître plus naturel.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I don't mind waiting for others, even if they are late. For example, I usually go with the flow and take my time to avoid stress.

建议: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de fluidité. Utilisez des phrases complètes et des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence.

示例: I rarely feel impatient in daily life, but I become anxious and impatient when I don't know if a family member is safe, as their well-being is very important to me.

建议: Votre réponse est bonne mais un peu répétitive. Essayez d'utiliser des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide et évitez de répéter les mêmes idées.

示例: I don't mind doing something for a long time because I trust the process. Therefore, I focus on my work and work hard, knowing that the results will be positive eventually.

建议: Votre réponse contient beaucoup d'hésitations et de répétitions. Essayez de préparer des réponses claires et concises, en évitant les mots inutiles et en structurant bien vos phrases.

示例: I am currently a university student, and my major requires patience because it involves many complex subjects and structures that take time to understand.

建议: Votre réponse est incomplète et manque de clarté. Assurez-vous de terminer vos phrases et d'expliquer clairement vos idées avec des exemples précis.

示例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, I used to rush and demand things from my parents without understanding their hard work, but now I appreciate their efforts and am more patient.

× Actually in daily life I rarely been impatient, but if there's a case where I feel impatient is that when my there's a family member of mine that I don't know if they are safe or not.

✓ Actually in daily life I have rarely been impatient, but if there's a case where I feel impatient, it is when there is a family member of mine that I don't know if they are safe or not.

The verb 'been' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. The sentence lacked 'have' before 'rarely been', which is necessary to express an experience up to now.

× Actually in daily life I rarely been impatient, but if there's a case where I feel impatient is that when my there's a family member of mine that I don't know if they are safe or not.

✓ Actually in daily life I have rarely been impatient, but if there's a case where I feel impatient, it is when there is a family member of mine that I don't know if they are safe or not.

The sentence was awkward and unclear due to missing words and incorrect structure. Adding 'it is' clarifies the subject of the second clause, and correcting 'my there's' to 'there is' improves clarity.

× Yes, I think I'm more patient now than in the past because back then I was always rush rushing and try to push my parents to buy my toys or feed me with good food without knowing them working so hard.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient now than in the past because back then I was always rushing and trying to push my parents to buy my toys or feed me with good food without knowing they were working so hard.

The verbs 'rush' and 'try' should be in the present participle form 'rushing' and 'trying' to correctly follow the auxiliary 'was always' and maintain parallel structure. Also, 'them working' should be 'they were working' for correct subject-verb agreement.