耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'disquality'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng từ đúng ngữ cảnh.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I have developed this quality through my work and study experiences. For example, I enjoy marathon running, which requires a lot of mental strength and endurance, and it has taught me to be patient and resilient in life.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'naughty touring' không rõ nghĩa và 'loud annoyed' không đúng. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

示例: I often feel impatient when children behave badly because their actions can be really annoying. For example, I lose my temper when they make loud noises or don't listen to adults. In such situations, I find it hard to stay calm and tolerate their misbehavior.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách tránh dùng từ thừa như 'while' và 'however' cùng lúc. Hãy sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Doing something for a long time can be a bit tedious, but since I am a patient person, I usually don't have any problem with it. For example, I have been jogging regularly for almost 10 years since I was 16, and I have never stopped because I really enjoy it.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt, ví dụ 'To know scientific experiments' không đúng. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, absolutely. I am a researcher at a science institute, and my job requires a great deal of patience because scientific experiments often take a long time and involve many risks of failure. Therefore, I have to be willing to try repeatedly and learn from my mistakes.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'when I was jungle' nên là 'when I was young' và 'I can read' nên là 'I could read'. Hãy sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Well, I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, when I was young, I could read a book for the entire day without getting distracted, which shows I had a lot of patience. However, nowadays I find it hard to concentrate for a long time, probably because of my busy schedule.

× I have developed disquality through work and study experience.

✓ I have developed discipline through work and study experience.

The word 'disquality' is incorrect and does not exist in English. The intended meaning is likely 'discipline', which is the correct adjective to describe a quality developed through experience.

× I often lose my temper with the children who keep making loud annoyed or don't listen to adults speak.

✓ I often lose my temper with the children who keep making loud noises or don't listen to adults speaking.

The phrase 'making loud annoyed' is incorrect; 'annoyed' is an adjective describing feelings, not sounds. The correct phrase is 'making loud noises'. Also, 'adults speak' should be 'adults speaking' to indicate the ongoing action.

× I found it really hard to stay calm in this situation or the tolerate such misbehaving actions.

✓ I found it really hard to stay calm in this situation or to tolerate such misbehaving actions.

The verb 'tolerate' requires the preposition 'to' before it when used in this context. Omitting 'to' is a grammatical error.

× While having to do something for a long time can be a bit tedious for me, however, because I am a patient person, I almost have no problem with it.

✓ While having to do something for a long time can be a bit tedious for me, I almost have no problem with it because I am a patient person.

Using both 'while' and 'however' together in the same sentence is redundant and causes sentence structure issues. Removing 'however' improves clarity and correctness.

× To know scientific experiments can take a long time and involve many risk of failure, so I have to be willing to try again and again and learn from my mistakes.

✓ You know scientific experiments can take a long time and involve many risks of failure, so I have to be willing to try again and again and learn from my mistakes.

The phrase 'many risk' is incorrect because 'risk' is a countable noun here and should be pluralized as 'risks' when preceded by 'many'.

× Well, I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, when I was jungle, I can read a book for the entire day without getting distracted, which proves that I had a lot of patience.

✓ Well, I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, when I was young, I could read a book for the entire day without getting distracted, which proves that I had a lot of patience.

The word 'jungle' is a typo and should be 'young'. Also, 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency when referring to past ability.