耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but it lacks fluency and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I don't think I am a patient person because I like to do things quickly. Therefore, I often feel impatient when things don't go my way."

示例: I don't think I am a patient person because I like to do things quickly. Therefore, I often feel impatient when things don't go my way.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words like "for example" properly. Also, avoid incomplete sentences. For instance, you can say, "I feel impatient when things don't go my way. For example, if my homework is not done on time or if someone in my group does not do their part properly, I become very impatient."

示例: I feel impatient when things don't go my way. For example, if my homework is not done on time or if someone in my group does not do their part properly, I become very impatient.

建议: Your answer shows good ideas but has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to use correct expressions and linking words. For example, you can say, "I feel motivated when I have to do something for a long time because it allows me to research and learn many things about the topic. Therefore, I get very excited."

示例: I feel motivated when I have to do something for a long time because it allows me to research and learn many things about the topic. Therefore, I get very excited.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "Actually, I am a student, so my job does not require much patience. However, I need some patience when researching different topics and learning new aspects of my career."

示例: Actually, I am a student, so my job does not require much patience. However, I need some patience when researching different topics and learning new aspects of my career.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. For example, "Actually, I was more patient in my childhood. I could wait for hours to do things properly. But now, I tend to be impatient if things don't go my way."

示例: Actually, I was more patient in my childhood. I could wait for hours to do things properly. But now, I tend to be impatient if things don't go my way.

× I often been impatient when things are not done in my way

✓ I have often been impatient when things are not done my way

The sentence incorrectly uses 'been' without an auxiliary verb. The present perfect tense requires 'have' or 'has' before the past participle 'been'. So, 'I have often been impatient' is correct.

× I am not a patient person of IN

✓ I am not a patient person

The phrase 'of IN' is incorrect and unnecessary here. The sentence should end at 'person' to be grammatically correct.

× When things are not going well in my own ways

✓ When things are not going well in my own way

The phrase 'in my own ways' is incorrect because 'way' in this context is singular. The correct phrase is 'in my own way'.

× I tried

✓ I try

The sentence uses past tense 'tried' incorrectly when the context suggests a habitual action, which requires present tense 'try'.

× I tend to vary in patient

✓ I tend to be very impatient

The phrase 'vary in patient' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'be very impatient' to describe the tendency.

× someone in my group or as I'm in Group is not doing their job properly

✓ someone in my group or as I'm in the group is not doing his or her job properly

The pronoun 'their' is plural, but 'someone' is singular. To maintain agreement, use 'his or her' or rephrase the sentence.

× I am using form then I tend to vary in patient

✓ I am using form then I tend to be very impatient

The phrase 'vary in patient' is incorrect. It should be 'be very impatient'. Also, 'using form' is unclear and may need clarification.

× I can explore may things that in the topic

✓ I can explore many things in the topic

The phrase 'that in the topic' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in the topic'.

× I can explore may things

✓ I can explore many things

The word 'may' is incorrect here; the correct quantifier is 'many'.

× This needs a very patient

✓ This needs a lot of patience

'Patient' is an adjective; the noun form 'patience' is needed here. Also, 'a very patient' is incorrect; 'a lot of patience' is appropriate.

× I tend to a very eger an inpatient

✓ I tend to be very eager and impatient

The words 'eger' and 'inpatient' are misspelled and misused. The correct words are 'eager' and 'impatient'. Also, 'tend to a' should be 'tend to be'.

× things don't turn in the in my way

✓ things don't turn out my way

The phrase 'turn in the in my way' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'turn out my way'.

× I kept waiting for hours to do it things and to the things very quickly and rightly

✓ I kept waiting for hours to do things and to do them very quickly and correctly

The sentence has structural errors and unclear phrases. 'It things' should be 'things', and 'to the things' should be 'to do them'. 'Rightly' is better replaced with 'correctly'.