耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For example, every morning I can wait in a long line to get my coffee without feeling annoyed, while some people might get tired or frustrated. I actually enjoy the time to relax and prepare for the day.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả tình huống cụ thể khiến bạn mất kiên nhẫn.

示例: One situation that makes me feel impatient is when I see people shouting at each other loudly. The noise is very disturbing and makes me feel uncomfortable.

建议: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cảm xúc của bạn một cách rõ ràng, có liên kết logic.

示例: At first, I usually feel stressed and tired when I have to do something for a long time. However, I try to focus and think positively, which helps me stay patient and complete the task.

建议: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

示例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient every day because I work with many people and have to solve difficult and complicated tasks. Therefore, patience is essential for me to handle challenges effectively.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích sự thay đổi về tính kiên nhẫn của bạn qua thời gian.

示例: Yes, I believe I have become more patient compared to when I was a child. In the past, I would get annoyed easily, but now I feel calmer and can handle situations more smoothly.

× Patient person for *****.

✓ Patient person for me.

The phrase 'Patient person for *****' is unclear and likely a misuse of singular/plural form or missing words. It should be 'Patient person for me' to correctly express the idea that the speaker considers themselves a patient person.

× Are there some person maybe assorted and be tired after long line waiting?

✓ Are there some people maybe annoyed and tired after waiting in a long line?

The word 'person' should be plural 'people' to match 'some'. Also, 'assorted' is incorrect here; 'annoyed' fits better. 'Long line waiting' should be 'waiting in a long line' for correct preposition use.

× after long line waiting?

✓ after waiting in a long line?

The phrase 'long line waiting' is incorrect; the verb 'waiting' should be preceded by a preposition 'in' to form 'waiting in a long line'.

× But for me I'm I'm still very enjoyed.

✓ But for me, I'm still enjoying it very much.

The verb 'enjoyed' is past participle and incorrectly used here. The correct form is present continuous 'enjoying'. Also, 'very enjoyed' is incorrect; 'enjoying it very much' is better.

× Well, I will leave all one of the moments that make me feel impatient is when I ask see someone or group of people just shout just something at each other.

✓ Well, I will leave that one of the moments that makes me feel impatient is when I see someone or a group of people just shouting something at each other.

The sentence is confusing and has structural errors. 'I will leave all one of the moments' is unclear; it should be 'I will say that one of the moments'. 'Ask see' is incorrect; it should be 'see'. 'Group of people just shout just something' should be 'a group of people just shouting something'.

× one of the moments that make me feel impatient

✓ one of the moments that makes me feel impatient

The subject 'one' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'.

× The noise the noise is in the NDS Murphy and make me feel uncomfortable so I can.

✓ The noise is annoying and makes me feel uncomfortable, so I can't.

'in the NDS Murphy' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Annoying' fits better to describe noise. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'noise'. The sentence ends abruptly; 'so I can't' is assumed to mean 'so I can't tolerate it'.

× Well our at the beginning maybe I feel some stred and I feel tired and now baby I just just come up my mind that like we are quick job.

✓ Well, at the beginning maybe I feel stressed and tired, but now I just make up my mind that it's like a quick job.

'our' is incorrect, should be 'at'. 'stred' is a misspelling of 'stressed'. 'now baby' is likely 'but now'. 'come up my mind' should be 'make up my mind'. 'we are quick job' is incorrect; 'it's like a quick job' is better.

× But later when I when I when I asked myself to come to camera, I think thoughtfully and maybe I just can't.

✓ But later, when I asked myself to calm down, I think thoughtfully and maybe I just can't.

'come to camera' is likely 'calm down'. Repetition of 'when I' is an error. 'asked' is past tense, which fits the context. The sentence ends abruptly; 'maybe I just can't' is incomplete but kept as is.

× Yes, my job asked me to be patient day day by day because I have to work with multiple people and I have to solve a lot of difficult and complicated task, so I must be patient all the time.

✓ Yes, my job asks me to be patient day by day because I have to work with multiple people and I have to solve a lot of difficult and complicated tasks, so I must be patient all the time.

'job asked' should be 'job asks' to agree with present tense. 'day day by day' should be 'day by day'. 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'a lot of'.

× Yes, I believe I have all developed my patient by patient ability or more than I was.

✓ Yes, I believe I have developed my patience ability more than when I was a child.

'all developed' is incorrect; 'have developed' is correct. 'patient by patient ability' is unclear; 'patience ability' or better 'patience' is correct. 'or more than I was' is incomplete; 'more than when I was a child' clarifies meaning.

× And where were child like when I do the same the same thing that make me feel annoyed when I watch I but nowadays I feel more calmer I I can do it smoothly.

✓ And when I was a child, doing the same thing would make me feel annoyed, but nowadays I feel calmer and I can do it smoothly.

'where were child' should be 'when I was a child'. 'do the same the same thing' should be 'doing the same thing'. 'make' should be 'would make' to indicate past habitual action. 'more calmer' is incorrect; 'calmer' is sufficient.