耐心— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用简单句表达观点。

示例: I am usually not a patient person. I often get impatient with many things. However, my mother always tells me that patience is important in life, so I am trying to improve my attitude.

建议: 回答不完整且含糊，缺乏具体内容和连贯性。建议明确说明让你不耐烦的具体事情，并用连词连接句子。

示例: I feel impatient when I have to deal with difficult problems at work because they take a lot of time and effort to solve.

建议: 表达不够流畅，语法错误影响理解。建议用连贯的句子表达感受，并具体说明原因。

示例: I feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time because I find it hard to concentrate, and it makes me feel frustrated.

建议: 回答中断且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明工作中需要耐心的原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: Yes, my job requires me to be patient because as a future businessman, I need to maintain good relationships with clients and handle negotiations carefully.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题。建议用清晰的句子描述过去和现在的对比，并举例说明。

示例: I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. My mother used to send me to play chess to help me improve my concentration, and now I can focus better and be more patient.

× In the most of time I saying I'm not a patient person.

✓ Most of the time I say I'm not a patient person.

句中 'I saying' 使用了错误的动词形式，应该用一般现在时 'I say'。动词 + -ing 形式通常用于进行时态，而此处描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时。

× I always. Being impatient for everything but my mom's told me patient is the key in life.

✓ I am always impatient about everything, but my mom told me patience is the key in life.

句子结构混乱，'I always. Being impatient' 不是完整句子，应改为 'I am always impatient'。此外，'my mom's told me' 中's 不应出现，且 'patient' 应为名词 'patience'。

× So I need you set on my attitude of being a patient people.

✓ So I need to set my attitude to being a patient person.

句中 'you set on my attitude' 用法错误，应为 'I need to set my attitude'。'people' 是复数，指单个人应使用 'person'。

× I feel impatient when I have to. So sound travels. Is specially the troubles that in my job and I need to deal with.

✓ I feel impatient when I have to deal with problems, especially the troubles in my job.

句子断裂且结构混乱，'So sound travels.' 无意义，应合并并重组句子，使其通顺表达。

× I will feel impatient when I have something to do for a long time. Because I always. Can't keep myself concentrating on something for a long time that will makes me feel terrifying.

✓ I feel impatient when I have something to do for a long time because I can't keep myself concentrating on it, which makes me feel frustrated.

句中 'that will makes me feel terrifying' 语法错误，'makes' 主谓不一致，应为 'make'，且 'terrifying' 用词不当，改为 'frustrated' 更合适。

× Of course, my job required me to be patient.

✓ Of course, my job requires me to be patient.

描述现在的工作职责，应使用一般现在时 'requires'，而非过去时 'required'。

× I wanted to be a businessman in the future, so I think trading an. Staying keeping relationship with people and how do you treat your trading requirements to be patient.

✓ I want to be a businessman in the future, so I think trading and maintaining relationships with people require patience.

时态错误，'wanted' 应为 'want'。'Staying keeping relationship' 用词重复且错误，应为 'maintaining relationships'。句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I'm sure that I'm more patient now then when I were a child.

✓ I'm sure that I'm more patient now than when I was a child.

'then' 应为比较连词 'than'，'were' 应为 'was'，因为主语是第一人称单数。

× When I was a child, I was. Impatient of everything's an I can keep myself concentrating on doing things so my mom.

✓ When I was a child, I was impatient about everything and couldn't keep myself concentrating on doing things, so my mom...

'Impatient of' 应为 'impatient about'，'can' 应为过去时 'could'，句子不完整需补充。

× Send me to play chess. And now I have more. I become more patient about doing things.

✓ She sent me to play chess. And now I have become more patient about doing things.

句子缺少主语和时态错误，'send' 应为过去时 'sent'，'I have more' 不完整，应为 'I have become more patient'。