零食— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较简单，且有语法错误。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I usually eat snacks while watching TV. For instance, this Friday my favorite TV series will be aired, so I plan to buy some snacks and soft drinks to enjoy it. I find this very relaxing.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的语法结构，并且表达观点时更连贯。

示例: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many of them are fried or junk food, which contain a lot of oil. However, I still enjoy eating them sometimes.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但语法和表达有待改进。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: No, I didn't eat snacks often when I was young because my mother believed they were unhealthy, especially for children. Therefore, she controlled the amount of snacks I could have.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然。

示例: I really enjoy eating chips because they taste good and make watching TV more enjoyable. However, I know they are unhealthy, so I try to limit how many I eat to avoid harm.

× I think it relax thing.

✓ I think it is a relaxing thing.

这里需要用动名词形式'relaxing'来修饰名词'thing'，表示使人放松的事物。原句中'relax'是动词原形，语法错误。

× Many snacks are those fried things or junk food so it has many oils maybe but it don't prevent me to like eating them.

✓ Many snacks are fried things or junk food, so they may have a lot of oil, but that doesn't stop me from liking to eat them.

主语'snacks'是复数，谓语动词和代词也应使用复数形式，如'they'和'don't'应改为'they'和'doesn't'。此外，'prevent me to like eating them'结构不正确，应改为'stop me from liking to eat them'。

× No, I didn't because my mother thought snacks are unhealthy to us, especially young children, so she controls the snacks I ate when I'm young to prevent unhealthy things.

✓ No, I didn't because my mother thought snacks were unhealthy for us, especially young children, so she controlled the snacks I ate when I was young to prevent unhealthy things.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如'thought'后面从句中的'vere'，'controls'应改为'controlled'，'I'm young'应改为'I was young'。

× I really enjoyed eating chips because it tastes good and makes the TV shows more enjoyable when I watching them, but I know it's unhealthy so I will limit the amount I eat them to prevent harmful for.

✓ I really enjoy eating chips because they taste good and make the TV shows more enjoyable when I watch them, but I know it's unhealthy so I will limit the amount I eat to prevent harm.

'enjoyed'应改为一般现在时'enjoy'以符合上下文时态；'it tastes'应改为'they taste'因为chips是复数；'makes'应改为'make'与复数主语一致；'when I watching'应改为'when I watch'；'limit the amount I eat them'中'them'多余，应去掉；'prevent harmful for'表达不正确，应改为'prevent harm'。