零食— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Make your answer more concise and natural by directly stating when and why you eat snacks, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I usually eat snacks in the evening after finishing all my work because I have some leisure time then. For example, I often snack while watching television.

建议: Focus on grammar accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons to support your opinion.

示例: Yes, I think eating snacks is healthy for me because I only eat small amounts. Moreover, I follow a diet that helps improve my overall health.

建议: Use past tense consistently and clarify your meaning. Avoid vague statements and provide specific examples to make your answer clearer.

示例: When I was young, I often ate snacks. For instance, sometimes I ate meat-based snacks, but other times I only had snacks once a week.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by adding more details and linking words to enrich your response.

示例: I like to eat samosas because they are very delectable and spicy. Additionally, I enjoy their crispy texture, which makes them a perfect snack.

× I usually eat snacks in the evening because that time I done my all works and I have leisure time to do another activities so I eat the snacks.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the evening because at that time I have done all my work and I have leisure time to do other activities, so I eat snacks.

The phrase 'I done my all works' is incorrect because 'done' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'all works' should be 'all my work' as 'work' is uncountable here. 'Another activities' is incorrect; it should be 'other activities' because 'another' is used with singular nouns, while 'activities' is plural.

× So when I was watching television.

✓ So, I eat snacks when I am watching television.

The sentence 'So when I was watching television.' is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clause. It should be connected properly to express the intended meaning, such as 'So, I eat snacks when I am watching television.' to complete the thought.

× Yes indeed because I only a small amount of snacks so it not affect on my health and I also followed a diet which helps me to improve my health.

✓ Yes indeed, because I only eat a small amount of snacks so it does not affect my health, and I also follow a diet which helps me improve my health.

The sentence is missing the verb 'eat' after 'I only'. 'Small amount' is correct for uncountable nouns, but 'snacks' is countable plural, so 'small amount' should be 'small number' or better 'a small amount of snacks' can be accepted informally. 'It not affect' should be 'it does not affect' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Followed' should be 'follow' to maintain present tense consistency.

× When I was young, I really eat snacks.

✓ When I was young, I really ate snacks.

The sentence refers to a past time 'when I was young', so the verb should be in the past tense 'ate' instead of the present tense 'eat'.

× Sometimes I eat snacks on some meat and sometimes I eat snacks after one week.

✓ Sometimes I eat snacks with some meat and sometimes I eat snacks once a week.

'Eat snacks on some meat' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' to indicate accompaniment. 'After one week' is awkward; 'once a week' is the correct expression to indicate frequency.