天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I like sunny' nên là 'I like sunny weather'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ như 'sun' và 'sunny'. Bạn cũng nên thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I like sunny weather because it allows me to hang out with my friends and enjoy many outdoor activities.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'We can gathering' nên là 'We can gather'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

示例: I prefer cold weather because it gives me a chance to spend quality time with my family. We can gather around the fireplace and enjoy hot coffee together.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như 'when the weather dry' nên là 'when the weather is dry' và 'go shop' nên là 'go shopping'. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm' và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I prefer dry weather because when it is dry, we can enjoy outdoor activities such as playing sports, hanging out with friends, or going shopping.

建议: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ lặp lại và không cần thiết như 'umm', 'uh'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và giải thích cụ thể hơn.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because it helps me know if the day will be hot, cold, rainy, or sunny.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

示例: I think climate change has caused more frequent and severe storms in recent years, such as the big storms we experienced in 2024, which affected many residents.

建议: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm', 'uh' và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc tốt hơn và giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn muốn đến những nơi có khí hậu khác.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing new weather makes me feel cozy and comfortable.

× I like sunny because when the weather is sun I can hanging out with my friends and do some, uh, lots of activities outside.

✓ I like sunny weather because when the weather is sunny I can hang out with my friends and do lots of activities outside.

The word 'sunny' is an adjective and should be used to describe 'weather'. 'Sun' is a noun and incorrect here. 'Hanging' should be 'hang' to match the modal verb 'can'. Also, 'some, uh, lots of activities' is redundant; 'lots of activities' is sufficient.

× I like sunny because when the weather is sun I can hanging out with my friends and do some, uh, lots of activities outside.

✓ I like sunny weather because when the weather is sunny I can hang out with my friends and do lots of activities outside.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'can hanging out' should be 'can hang out'.

× I prefer cold weather because it allows me to spend time with my family. We can gathering before the fire, we can drink hot coffee.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it allows me to spend time with my family. We can gather before the fire, and we can drink hot coffee.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'can gathering' should be 'can gather'. Also, the two independent clauses should be connected properly with 'and'.

× I prefer dry weather because umm, when the weather dry we can do some outdoor activities like playing sports, hanging out with friends or go shop.

✓ I prefer dry weather because, umm, when the weather is dry we can do some outdoor activities like playing sports, hanging out with friends, or going shopping.

'When the weather dry' is missing the verb 'is'. Also, parallel structure requires consistent verb forms: 'playing', 'hanging out', and 'going shopping'.

× Yes, of course. I'm checking the weather forecast every day. Umm, because it, umm, uh, remind me that, uh, today is a hot or cold or rain or sunny, Yeah.

✓ Yes, of course. I check the weather forecast every day because it reminds me whether today is hot, cold, rainy, or sunny.

Habitual actions use simple present tense, so 'I'm checking' should be 'I check'. 'Remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, the list of weather conditions should be adjectives or adverbs properly used.

× I think effects of climate change in recent years is umm, stormy, umm, in 2024, umm we have a big storms it make a resident uh.

✓ I think the effects of climate change in recent years are stormy. In 2024, we had big storms that affected residents.

'Effects' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'A big storms' is incorrect; 'storms' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, sentence structure and verb tense are corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I want to know some new. Climate in the other cities, umm, because it's simply, uh, it's make me umm, cozy and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I want to know about the new climates in other cities because they simply make me feel cozy and comfortable.

'Some new. Climate' is incorrect; 'new climates' is plural and no period needed. 'It's simply, uh, it's make me' is ungrammatical; 'they simply make me feel' is correct. Also, 'cozy and comfortable' are adjectives describing feelings.