天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly describe the weather and avoid vague or confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your sentences concise.

示例: The weather where I live is generally mild, with hot days and cool nights. However, in December, it becomes quite cold, which makes people feel happy and festive.

建议: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct statement of your preference, then explain why with specific reasons. Avoid repetitive or unclear phrases.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I have loved it since I was a child. Cold weather makes me feel refreshed and energetic, so I can focus better and complete my work efficiently.

建议: Your response should be more concise and coherent. Clearly state your preference and support it with specific reasons. Avoid vague or confusing expressions and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable for working. People tend to feel more energetic and productive when the weather is dry rather than wet.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more natural by directly answering the question. Explain when and why you check the forecast, using correct grammar and linking words.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day before I go out for my studies. It helps me plan my day better and stay prepared for any weather changes.

建议: Your answer should be more organized and use clearer language. Start with a general statement about climate change, then explain causes and effects with specific details and linking words.

示例: In recent years, climate change has become a serious problem affecting everyone's life. Pollution is the main cause, and if it continues, it will have severe negative impacts on our future.

建议: Your answer should be more concise and clear. State your preference directly and explain why, using appropriate linking words and avoiding repetition.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new weather. It helps me relax and adapt to different environments.

× In my country, the weather is mild, sometimes hot and sometimes the cool night.

✓ In my country, the weather is mild, sometimes hot and sometimes cool at night.

The phrase 'the cool night' is incorrect because 'cool' is an adjective describing 'night', which should not have the definite article 'the' here. Also, 'sometimes the cool night' is awkward; it should be 'sometimes cool at night' to describe the temperature during the night.

× But in the last month of the year, that time is so much cold and everyone feels so much happy.

✓ But in the last month of the year, it is very cold and everyone feels very happy.

The phrase 'so much cold' is incorrect; 'cold' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' instead of 'so much'. Similarly, 'so much happy' is incorrect; 'happy' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very'.

× Weather is not suitable for us, that time we feel favored and others.

✓ The weather is not suitable for us; at that time, we feel favored compared to others.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. 'Weather is not suitable for us' needs the definite article 'The'. The phrase 'that time we feel favored and others' is unclear and incomplete; it is corrected to clarify the meaning.

× I prefer cold weather because when I was a child that time to in this time I love it so much.

✓ I prefer cold weather because when I was a child, I loved it very much at that time.

The sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. 'I love it so much' should be in past tense 'I loved it very much' to match 'when I was a child'. The phrase 'that time to in this time' is incorrect and removed for clarity.

× I enjoy that cold weather and always feel refreshed and it's a time that's time I cannot feel lazy and I properly doing my work.

✓ I enjoy that cold weather and always feel refreshed; it's a time when I cannot feel lazy and I properly do my work.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect verb forms. 'that's time I cannot feel lazy' is corrected to 'when I cannot feel lazy'. 'I properly doing my work' is incorrect; it should be 'I properly do my work'.

× I prefer dry weather because the weather is suitable for working and the time everyone feeling energetic and properly doing their work.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is suitable for working, and during that time, everyone feels energetic and properly does their work.

The sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and pronoun clarity. 'the time everyone feeling' should be 'during that time, everyone feels'. Also, 'the weather is suitable' is better replaced with 'it is suitable' to avoid repetition.

× That's why I prefer dry and the world weather is OK, but I cannot prefer it because it is so much unperfect for working and others are doing.

✓ That's why I prefer dry weather. The wet weather is okay, but I do not prefer it because it is very imperfect for working and other activities.

The sentence is confusing and has incorrect word usage. 'the world weather' should be 'the wet weather'. 'so much unperfect' is incorrect; 'very imperfect' is better. 'others are doing' is vague and replaced with 'other activities' for clarity.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast because every day I am going outside for my study and after that time I checking whether that is helpful for me and it is day by day habitat for me.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast because every day I go outside for my studies, and after that, I check whether it is helpful for me; it has become a daily habit for me.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms: 'I am going' should be 'I go', 'I checking' should be 'I check'. 'day by day habitat' is incorrect; it should be 'daily habit'.

× In the recent year the climate is changing day by day and it is really a bad for us because of the climate is more crucial part of everyone life.

✓ In recent years, the climate has been changing day by day, and it is really bad for us because climate is a crucial part of everyone's life.

'In the recent year' should be 'In recent years' for general statement. 'the climate is changing' is better as present perfect continuous 'has been changing' to indicate ongoing change. 'a bad' is incorrect; 'bad' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'more crucial' is incorrect; 'crucial' alone suffices. 'everyone life' should be 'everyone's life'.

× The pollution is main cause for climate changing and that's doing day by day and it's in the future have a bad impact for us.

✓ Pollution is the main cause of climate change, and it is happening day by day; in the future, it will have a bad impact on us.

'main cause for' should be 'main cause of'. 'climate changing' should be 'climate change'. 'that's doing day by day' is awkward; 'it is happening day by day' is better. 'it's in the future have' is incorrect; 'in the future, it will have' is correct. 'impact for us' should be 'impact on us'.

× Yes, I love to visit other cities when there is a different climate because this type of weather I really enjoy and I am also suitable for this type of weather.

✓ Yes, I love to visit other cities when there is a different climate because I really enjoy this type of weather and I am also suited to it.

The phrase 'this type of weather I really enjoy' is awkward; it should be 'I really enjoy this type of weather'. 'I am also suitable for this type of weather' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I am suited to this type of weather'.

× That's why I always enjoy this and I am going to visit there for visiting this.

✓ That's why I always enjoy it, and I am going to visit there to experience this.

The sentence is awkward and repetitive. 'visit there for visiting this' is incorrect; it should be 'visit there to experience this' or similar. Also, 'enjoy this' should be 'enjoy it' for clarity.