天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语句不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并准确表达天气变化的影响。

示例: I live in Beijing, where summers are usually dry. However, this year it has rained a lot, making the air feel humid and less clear than before.

建议: 回答中有较多重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明偏好并给出具体原因。

示例: I personally prefer cold weather because I sweat a lot in summer, which makes me uncomfortable and limits my clothing choices.

建议: 回答缺少连贯性，表达不够准确。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并准确描述感受。

示例: I prefer dry weather because I live in northern China. However, when I visit the south, the humid climate makes my skin feel smooth, which I find pleasant.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议完整表达习惯并举例说明影响。

示例: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast. Because of this, I often dress inappropriately, like wearing shorts when it's actually cold.

建议: 回答不完整且有重复，缺少具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并具体说明气候变化的影响。

示例: Climate change is evident in Beijing, which used to be dry but is now more humid. This change affects people's lifestyles, such as their clothing and daily activities.

建议: 回答中有过多语气词，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，简洁表达喜好并具体描述感受。

示例: Yes, I love traveling. I often visit coastal cities like Guangzhou and Xiamen, where the climate is quite different from my hometown.

× It's raining the whole summer, which made me make the the air so white.

✓ It has been raining the whole summer, which made the air so white.

这里使用现在进行时 "It's raining the whole summer" 不符合语境，应该用现在完成进行时表示从过去持续到现在的动作，即 "has been raining"。另外，句中 "made me make the the air so white" 结构不正确，应改为 "made the air so white"。

× I prefer I personally prefer cold weather because I swipe swipe a lot during the summer, which makes me sometimes makes me very awkward like I can't wear very the the the T-shirts in light color.

✓ I personally prefer cold weather because I sweat a lot during the summer, which sometimes makes me very uncomfortable, like I can't wear very light-colored T-shirts.

句中 "swipe swipe" 是错误的词，应为 "sweat"。"awkward" 用于描述人的动作不自然，这里应使用 "uncomfortable" 表示不舒服。"very the the the T-shirts in light color" 结构混乱，应改为 "very light-colored T-shirts"。

× I feel my skin become very smooth and watery, which makes me very pleasant, so I prefer.

✓ I feel my skin becomes very smooth and moist, which makes me feel very pleasant, so I prefer it.

"feel my skin become" 应为 "feel my skin becomes"，主语是第三人称单数，动词需加 -s。"watery" 通常形容液体多，形容皮肤应用 "moist"。"makes me very pleasant" 应为 "makes me feel very pleasant"。句尾 "so I prefer" 需补充宾语。

× I seldom check the weather forecast which makes me always wear the wrong clothes in the different temperatures.

✓ I seldom check the weather forecast, which makes me always wear the wrong clothes in different temperatures.

"in the different temperatures" 中的定冠词 "the" 不必要，应去掉。

× Like I wear shorts when the temperature is really low with.

✓ Like I wear shorts when the temperature is really low.

句尾多余的介词 "with" 应删除。

× The climate change in recent years is quite obvious, like the the the weather change I mentioned in Beijing and this used to be a very dry area, but they but now it got very humid.

✓ The climate change in recent years is quite obvious, like the weather change I mentioned in Beijing. It used to be a very dry area, but now it has become very humid.

"they but now it got" 结构混乱，应拆分为两句，主语 "it" 指代北京，动词时态应为现在完成时 "has become"。

× I think that will influence the lifestyles of the people and also the.

✓ I think that will influence the lifestyles of the people as well.

句子不完整，"and also the." 需删除或补充完整。

× so when I visit the source cities like Guangzhou and Xiamen, uh, which is uh, at the coastal area, uh, I feel the climate there is really different.

✓ So when I visit cities like Guangzhou and Xiamen, which are in the coastal area, I feel the climate there is really different.

"source cities" 词不当，应为 "cities"。"which is at the coastal area" 中 "is" 应改为复数 "are"，且 "at the coastal area" 应改为 "in the coastal area"。