天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer provides relevant information but is somewhat lengthy and includes informal expressions like 'sweat like a pig' which are not appropriate for IELTS. Try to be more concise and use formal, natural language. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

示例: I live in a desert region where the weather is hot and dry throughout the year. Summers are particularly intense, with temperatures often soaring, making it uncomfortable for many people. As a result, most prefer to stay indoors with air conditioning during the hottest days.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains some errors and informal phrases. Avoid idioms like 'sweat like a pig' and incomplete sentences. Make sure to directly answer the question with clear reasons and complete sentences.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather uncomfortable. In summer, I often feel dehydrated and unwell due to the heat, so cooler temperatures suit me better.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing and incomplete. Try to structure your response clearly, directly stating your preference and supporting it with specific reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and incomplete thoughts.

示例: I prefer wet weather because I was born and raised in a dry climate, which I find hard to tolerate. When I visit northern cities with wet and humid weather, I enjoy the change as it feels refreshing and pleasant.

建议: Your answer contains useful information but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid repetition. Also, answer the question directly by stating how often and when you check the forecast.

示例: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast, especially before planning trips or outdoor activities. For example, my husband lives in London, so I often compare the weather there with my location to decide on suitable times for holidays or picnics.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is repetitive and incomplete. Try to organise your ideas clearly, avoid repeating phrases, and provide specific examples or consequences of climate change.

示例: I believe climate change has led to more extreme weather in recent years. Winters have become milder with less rainfall and snow, while summers are hotter than before, making it difficult for many people to cope.

建议: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and complete sentences. Also, provide clear reasons and examples to support your preference.

示例: Yes, I enjoy experiencing different climates because they create a refreshing and pleasant atmosphere. For instance, while some people feel gloomy on overcast days, I feel very happy. I also like sharing an umbrella with my husband when it rains, which makes the experience enjoyable.

× Since we live in the heart of the desert, the weather is hot and dry in all years, and it's boiling hot in summer, and most people cannot tolerate this weather, and we sweat like a pig.

✓ Since we live in the heart of the desert, the weather is hot and dry all year, and it's boiling hot in summer. Most people cannot tolerate this weather, and we sweat like pigs.

The phrase 'in all years' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'all year' to indicate throughout the year. Also, 'sweat like a pig' should be pluralized to 'sweat like pigs' to match the plural subject 'we'. This corrects the present tense usage and plural agreement.

× Most people prefer to lie down in front of air conditioner during summer days.

✓ Most people prefer to lie down in front of the air conditioner during summer days.

The phrase 'in front of air conditioner' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'air conditioner'. Also, 'during summer days' is correct but adding 'the' before 'summer days' would be more natural: 'during the summer days'.

× To answer your question since I'm a call father person, I prefer cold weather because I cannot tolerate hot weather and also I sweat like a pig and I feel under the weather.

✓ To answer your question, since I'm a cold father person, I prefer cold weather because I cannot tolerate hot weather. Also, I sweat like a pig and I feel under the weather.

The phrase 'call father person' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Assuming the intended phrase is 'cold weather person'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and should be split for clarity. 'Also' should start a new sentence.

× My whole body get dehydrated in summer days and also I like to.

✓ My whole body gets dehydrated in summer days, and also I like it.

The verb 'get' should be 'gets' to agree with the singular subject 'My whole body' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'I like to' is incomplete and should be 'I like it' or completed with an action.

× To be honest, I prefer wet weather because since I was born and raised in the weather and climate, I cannot tolerate it.

✓ To be honest, I prefer wet weather because since I was born and raised in dry weather and climate, I cannot tolerate it.

The phrase 'born and raised in the weather and climate' is vague and incorrect. It should specify the type of weather, e.g., 'dry weather and climate' to clarify the meaning.

× And whenever I go to northern cities, I like to this weather because the weather is wet and humid.

✓ And whenever I go to northern cities, I like this weather because the weather is wet and humid.

The phrase 'I like to this weather' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed to correctly say 'I like this weather'.

× It's really enjoyable for me. I can't tolerate.

✓ It's really enjoyable for me. I can't tolerate dry weather.

The sentence 'I can't tolerate.' is incomplete and lacks an object. It should specify what cannot be tolerated for clarity.

× Nowadays my husband and I compared the different regions and different areas.

✓ Nowadays my husband and I compare the different regions and different areas.

The verb 'compared' is past tense but 'nowadays' indicates present habitual action, so it should be 'compare' in present tense.

× Since he immigrated in London, I always compared the weather with each other.

✓ Since he immigrated to London, I always compare the weather with him.

The preposition 'in' should be 'to' after 'immigrated'. Also, 'compared' should be 'compare' to match the present habitual action indicated by 'always'. The phrase 'with each other' is incorrect here; 'with him' is appropriate.

× And then we wanted to go on a vacation and go holiday and picnic.

✓ And then we wanted to go on a vacation, go on holiday, and have a picnic.

The phrase 'go holiday' is incorrect; it should be 'go on holiday'. Also, 'picnic' needs a verb like 'have' to be correct.

× I prefer to check weather because we sometimes we have to change.

✓ I prefer to check the weather because sometimes we have to change plans.

The noun 'weather' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'we sometimes we have to change' is redundant and incomplete; it should be 'sometimes we have to change plans' for clarity.

× I believe, I believe that it's getting worse.

✓ I believe that it's getting worse.

The repetition 'I believe, I believe' is unnecessary and should be reduced to a single 'I believe' for clarity and correctness.

× The weather is dry and hot and we don't have lots of mild weather, especially in winter.

✓ The weather is dry and hot, and we don't have much mild weather, especially in winter.

The quantifier 'lots of' is informal and less appropriate here; 'much' is better for uncountable nouns like 'mild weather'.

× We don't have enough rains and snow and also the weather is boiling hot in summers and most people cannot tolerate it and.

✓ We don't have enough rain and snow, and also the weather is boiling hot in summer, and most people cannot tolerate it.

The word 'rains' should be 'rain' as it is uncountable. 'Summers' should be singular 'summer' when referring to the season generally. The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or the conjunction 'and' removed.

× Yes, I enjoy different climb.

✓ Yes, I enjoy different climates.

The word 'climb' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'climate' or plural 'climates'.

× I enjoy to experience different climate because it produces energetic and delightful atmosphere.

✓ I enjoy experiencing different climates because they produce an energetic and delightful atmosphere.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'experiencing', not the infinitive 'to experience'. Also, 'climate' should be plural 'climates' to match 'different'. 'Energetic and delightful atmosphere' needs the article 'an' before 'energetic'.

× When the sky is overcast, some people feel blue, but I feel over the moon.

✓ When the sky is overcast, some people feel blue, but I feel over the moon.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× And I like to share an umbrella with my husband when it results.

✓ And I like to share an umbrella with my husband when it rains.

The word 'results' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'rains' to indicate precipitation.

× And when it rains, I prefer to go and go.

✓ And when it rains, I prefer to go out and enjoy myself.

The phrase 'I prefer to go and go' is incomplete and repetitive. It should be completed with an activity or expression to clarify the meaning.