天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

示例: The weather where I live is usually warm and sunny, especially in summer. I enjoy summer because the sunny days allow me to spend time outdoors and do many fun activities like hiking and swimming.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to explain your reasons with specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

示例: I prefer hot weather because I was born in summer, and I find it more comfortable. For example, during summer, I can go outside easily and enjoy various activities without worrying about the cold.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using correct vocabulary and linking words.

示例: I prefer dry weather, especially when I am in the mountains. I enjoy the clear skies and the fresh air. Sometimes, I also like snowy weather because it feels peaceful and romantic.

建议: Your answer is too long and unclear. Start with a direct answer, then explain your reason clearly with proper grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

示例: No, I usually do not check the weather forecast. As a climate ambassador, I learned that weather forecasts are not always accurate, so I prefer to rely on my own observations.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and more specific details. Begin with a topic sentence, then use linking words to explain the effects of climate change with examples or comparisons.

示例: Climate change has had significant effects in recent years. For example, winters are now milder and summers are hotter compared to when I was a child, as my parents often mention.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasons with specific details and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and vague expressions.

示例: Yes, I enjoy traveling to cities with different climates. Changing climates feels refreshing and comfortable for my body, although sometimes my skin reacts differently to new weather conditions.

× I like summer. I like sunny days because I breathe in the summer some years ago.

✓ I like summer. I like sunny days because I breathed in the summer some years ago.

The verb 'breathe' should be in the past tense 'breathed' to match the time expression 'some years ago'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× So my favorite season is summer because you can do everything. You can do everything with your fun.

✓ So my favorite season is summer because you can do everything. You can do everything for your fun.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used; 'for' is the correct preposition to express purpose or benefit. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× And the reason is that in the summer you can make your time comfortable with you or you can go everywhere.

✓ And the reason is that in the summer you can make your time comfortable for yourself or you can go everywhere.

The phrase 'comfortable with you' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable for yourself' to indicate making time comfortable for oneself. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× If I am in the mountains, for me prefer is weather because I like when I'm in the clouds.

✓ If I am in the mountains, I prefer that weather because I like when I'm in the clouds.

The phrase 'for me prefer is weather' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer that weather'. This is a sentence structure and preposition issue (ID 11 and 26).

× I like when outside is called.

✓ I like when it is cold outside.

The word 'called' is a misspelling of 'cold'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; 'it is cold outside' is correct. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13) and sentence structure error (ID 26).

× Sometimes I also like snows.

✓ Sometimes I also like snow.

The noun 'snow' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'snows'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1).

× No, I never checked the weather forecast because I am a climate ambassador and when I become climate climate ambassador 2-3 years ago, they learned me that weather forecast is not right every time and it's not possible, so I'm not.

✓ No, I have never checked the weather forecast because I am a climate ambassador and when I became a climate ambassador 2-3 years ago, they taught me that the weather forecast is not right every time and it's not possible, so I don't.

The verbs 'checked' and 'become' should be in present perfect and past tense respectively ('have never checked', 'became'). 'Learned me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'taught me'. Also, 'weather forecast' needs the definite article 'the'. This involves past tense issue (ID 5), article errors (ID 22), and incorrect verb usage (ID 26).

× Yes, of course, the climate change has a great effect because when I was a child the climate was absolutely burnt, absolutely different because my parents saying that in the winter was cold, in the summer it was hot.

✓ Yes, of course, climate change has a great effect because when I was a child the climate was absolutely burnt, absolutely different because my parents said that in the winter it was cold, in the summer it was hot.

The phrase 'the climate change' should be 'climate change' without 'the'. Also, 'my parents saying' should be 'my parents said'. 'In the winter was cold' needs the subject 'it'. This is article error (ID 22) and past tense issue (ID 5).

× Yes, of course I'm ears most traveler, so I often going to some another cities and I like to change climates and it's so comfortable for my body.

✓ Yes, of course I'm an avid traveler, so I often go to some other cities and I like to experience different climates and it's so comfortable for my body.

The phrase 'I'm ears most traveler' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm an avid traveler'. 'Going' should be 'go' to match present tense. 'Some another cities' is incorrect; 'some other cities' is correct. 'Change climates' is better expressed as 'experience different climates'. This involves incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12), verb tense (ID 6), and article errors (ID 22).

× I don't know why but it's comfortable, but for my skin is not good because my face skin is so.

✓ I don't know why but it's comfortable, but it's not good for my skin because my facial skin is sensitive.

The phrase 'my face skin is so' is incomplete and incorrect. 'Facial skin' is the correct adjective form. The sentence needs completion to express the idea clearly. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13) and sentence structure error (ID 26).