天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cevaplar vermek için, cümle yapısını basit ve doğru tutmalı, gereksiz tekrarları önlemelisiniz. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı 3-4 cümle ile sınırlı tutarak daha etkili olabilirsiniz.

示例: I live in Istanbul, where the weather is usually sunny. Sometimes it rains, and I remember seeing snow once in 2020. However, it hasn't snowed here for about six years.

建议: Cümlelerinizde anlam bütünlüğü ve dilbilgisi sorunları var. Daha açık ve mantıklı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri birbirine bağlayarak daha akıcı ve anlaşılır cevaplar oluşturabilirsiniz.

示例: I prefer hot weather because I can relax with an air conditioner and drink as much cold water as I want. Also, if I want to go outside, I usually go at night when it's cooler.

建议: Cümlelerinizde anlatım bozuklukları ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha spesifik ve net ifadeler kullanarak, nedenlerinizi açıkça belirtmelisiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçlarla cümleleri birbirine bağlamaya özen gösterin.

示例: I prefer dry weather because rain often disturbs me when I am outside. Sudden rain bothers me a lot, so I don't like wet weather.

建议: Cümlelerinizde anlam kaybı ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha açık ve doğru cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevaplarınızı mantıklı bir sıra ile ve bağlaçlarla destekleyerek daha anlaşılır yapabilirsiniz.

示例: I usually check the weather forecast on my phone. I do this at the start of the day, around 10 o'clock.

建议: Cümlelerinizde uygunsuz kelimeler ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha uygun kelimeler kullanmalı ve cümlelerinizi düzgün yapıda kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi açık ve detaylı şekilde ifade etmeye çalışın.

示例: Due to climate change, it has been mostly sunny with little rain or snow, which is very problematic. Also, temperatures are rising steadily.

建议: Cümlelerinizde anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi sorunları var. Daha net ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, fikirlerinizi desteklemek için nedenler ve örnekler vermeniz faydalı olur.

示例: I would like to visit cities with different climates, but it depends on the city. For example, Ankara is nice because you can do many activities. However, I don't like places that are always snowy and rainy because I can't handle that kind of weather.

× So I living in Istanbul and usually our weather is it's sunny, sometimes being rainy and one time I saw snow in my city but it was 2020 since since six years I didn't.

✓ So I live in Istanbul and usually the weather is sunny, sometimes rainy, and one time I saw snow in my city but it was in 2020; I haven't seen snow since then.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'living' instead of the simple present 'live' to describe a habitual state. Also, 'being rainy' is incorrect; the adjective 'rainy' should be used without 'being'. The phrase 'since since six years I didn't' is ungrammatical; the correct form is 'I haven't seen snow since then' to express an action that has not occurred over a period of time.

× I prefer hot weather because you can be relaxed with air conditioner and you can always drink cold water. How many you want and if you stay. If you wanna go outside, you have to go nights.

✓ I prefer hot weather because you can relax with an air conditioner and you can always drink cold water as much as you want. And if you stay outside, you have to go at night.

The phrase 'you can be relaxed' is incorrect; the verb 'relax' should be used in its base form after 'can'. 'How many you want' is incorrect when referring to quantity of water; 'as much as you want' is appropriate. 'If you stay' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify 'if you stay outside'. 'You have to go nights' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'you have to go at night'.

× I prefer dry because that's where they always disturb me and when I go outside and you suddenly start rain, it's bothers me a lot. That's why I hate wet weathers.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather always disturbs me, and when I go outside and it suddenly starts to rain, it bothers me a lot. That's why I hate wet weather.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'wet weather'; it should be 'wet weather' or 'it'. 'You suddenly start rain' is incorrect; the subject should be 'it' and the verb form 'starts to rain' is correct. 'It's bothers me' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it bothers me'. 'Wet weathers' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and should not be pluralized.

× I usually check weather in my phone. I feel weather forecast and. I usually do when I start the day, like 10:00 or something like that.

✓ I usually check the weather on my phone. I follow the weather forecast. I usually do this when I start the day, around 10:00 or so.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'phone'; the correct preposition is 'on'. The phrase 'I feel weather forecast' is unclear and incorrect; 'I follow the weather forecast' is appropriate. The sentence 'I usually do when I start the day' is incomplete; adding 'this' clarifies the meaning.

× Always being sunny and you cannot see any rain or snow and it is sucks a lot actually. And always the ******* temperature goes up because the climate change.

✓ It is always sunny and you cannot see any rain or snow, and it sucks a lot actually. Also, the temperature always goes up because of climate change.

'Always being sunny' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It is always sunny'. 'It is sucks' is ungrammatical; 'it sucks' is correct. The phrase 'the ******* temperature' is unclear and inappropriate; it should be 'the temperature'. 'Because the climate change' requires the preposition 'because of' to be correct.

× You have to choose the city for it, because if you choose Ankara in Turkey, it is good for me because it is good and you can do anything you want. But if you choose 'cause I cannot do anything there because it's always snowy and rainy, I cannot handle that. My body, it cannot.

✓ You have to choose the city carefully because if you choose Ankara in Turkey, it is good for me since you can do anything you want there. But if you choose another city, I cannot do anything there because it's always snowy and rainy, and I cannot handle that. My body can't tolerate it.

The phrase 'choose the city for it' is unclear; 'choose the city carefully' is better. The sentence 'if you choose Ankara in Turkey, it is good for me because it is good' is repetitive and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity. 'But if you choose 'cause' is incomplete and incorrect; it should specify 'if you choose another city'. The fragment 'My body, it cannot' is incomplete; it should be 'My body can't tolerate it' to complete the thought.