天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to make your sentences complete and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the seasons and weather.

示例: The weather where I live is quite temperate. Sometimes it gets hot, and other times it becomes cold. Our country experiences six distinct seasons, including summer and winter, each with unique weather patterns.

建议: Your answer is understandable but repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more fluent.

示例: I mostly prefer hot weather because cold weather feels rough and dry to me. In winter, I often feel uncomfortable due to the dryness, so hot weather suits me better.

建议: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

示例: I prefer wet weather over dry weather because dry conditions make me feel uncomfortable. When it is wet, I feel more refreshed and comfortable.

建议: Your answer has some mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verbs and explain clearly when and why you check the weather forecast.

示例: Yes, I regularly check the weather forecast, especially before going outside. It helps me prepare for the day and avoid unexpected weather conditions.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more specific details and linking words to explain the effects clearly.

示例: Climate change has caused many problems in recent years, such as rising temperatures and extreme weather events. Global warming, mainly caused by human activities, is the main reason. Therefore, people should be more aware and take action to protect the environment.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear reason and use examples properly to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be a new experience for me. For example, I want to visit France, Sweden, and Australia to enjoy their unique weather and culture.

× Where I live the weather is very temperate and there are sometimes it's hot and sometimes it's cold and there are six seasons in our country in the summer, winter there is so very.

✓ Where I live, the weather is very temperate. Sometimes it's hot and sometimes it's cold. There are six seasons in our country, including summer and winter.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with multiple ideas joined incorrectly. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I mostly prefer the hot weather because cold is very rough and dry.

✓ I mostly prefer hot weather because the cold is very harsh and dry.

The adjective 'rough' is not appropriate to describe weather; 'harsh' is better. Also, 'cold' as a noun needs the definite article 'the' here.

× Actually I feel very dry and cold or winter season.

✓ Actually, I feel very dry and cold during the winter season.

The preposition 'during' is needed to indicate the time period 'winter season'. Also, 'or' is incorrect here.

× That's why I mostly prefer hot weather that's more suitable for me.

✓ That's why I mostly prefer hot weather, which is more suitable for me.

The relative pronoun 'which' is needed to correctly connect the clause describing the weather.

× I prefer wet weather rather than dry because I don't like weather when it's still dry.

✓ I prefer wet weather rather than dry because I don't like weather when it is dry.

The word 'still' is unnecessary and awkward here; removing it improves clarity.

× Which weather is more suitable for me? I feel good when it is wet.

✓ Wet weather is more suitable for me. I feel good when it is wet.

The question 'Which weather is more suitable for me?' is unnecessary and awkward; a statement is more appropriate.

× Yes, I am in the habit of shaking the weather forecast because I checked it regularly and when I am going to outside and it's needed to be checked.

✓ Yes, I am in the habit of checking the weather forecast because I check it regularly, especially when I am going outside and it needs to be checked.

The verb 'shaking' is incorrect; it should be 'checking'. Also, tense consistency and preposition use ('going outside') are corrected.

× The weather forecast is very necessary for us.

✓ The weather forecast is very necessary for us.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Climate change is alarming news for us in the perspective of recent years because global warming is the main reason for this change and man is responsible for all of this.

✓ Climate change is alarming news for us in recent years because global warming is the main reason for this change, and humans are responsible for all of this.

The phrase 'in the perspective of recent years' is incorrect; 'in recent years' is correct. Also, 'man' is better replaced with 'humans' for clarity and correctness.

× I think man should be aware about it.

✓ I think humans should be aware of it.

The correct preposition after 'aware' is 'of', not 'about'. Also, 'man' is better replaced with 'humans'.

× Yes, I want to visit other cities that have different climate because it's a new feelings for me.

✓ Yes, I want to visit other cities that have different climates because it's a new feeling for me.

The noun 'climate' should be plural 'climates' to agree with 'cities'. Also, 'feelings' should be singular 'feeling'.

× For an example, I want to visit France, Sweden and Australia also because there have many.

✓ For example, I want to visit France, Sweden, and Australia because they have many.

The phrase 'For an example' is incorrect; 'For example' is correct. Also, 'there have many' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what 'many' refers to or be rephrased.