天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，注意句子结构的完整性和流畅性。可以更自然地表达天气特点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I live in Guangzhou, where the weather is generally pleasant. In summer, it gets quite hot, but the winters are comfortable and not as cold as in cities like Beijing or Harbin.

建议: 回答中应注意语法正确，避免重复和不连贯的表达。使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明喜欢热天气的原因。

示例: I prefer hot weather because I don't like wearing many clothes. Also, I enjoy going to the beach in summer when the sun is shining, but in winter, strong winds make it less enjoyable.

建议: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误和重复。具体说明湿天气带来的不便，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I prefer dry weather because in Guangzhou, spring is very wet, which often causes water to enter my house. This makes it difficult for me to do my homework comfortably.

建议: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，应避免口头语，清晰表达习惯和原因。使用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: I usually check the weather forecast every evening to decide what clothes to prepare for the next day. This helps me dress appropriately and be comfortable.

建议: 回答内容不够准确且表达不清，应明确说明气候变化的影响，避免语法错误，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I believe climate change affects not only humans but also the natural environment. Significant weather changes can impact many aspects of nature, such as wildlife and plant life.

建议: 回答应避免重复，表达更自然流畅。可以用连接词表达对不同气候城市的看法，并具体说明喜欢的地方。

示例: I really like Guangzhou because it's comfortable for me, so I don't want to visit cities with very different climates. However, I would like to visit Sanya because it has a lot of sunshine, which I enjoy.

× However, in winter the weather is feel very comfortable because it's not really cold like Beijing or Harbin at their place.

✓ However, in winter the weather feels very comfortable because it's not really cold like Beijing or Harbin at their place.

动词feel在这里作为系动词，主语是单数weather，动词需要用第三人称单数形式feels。

× I prefer hot weather best because I don't like wear too much clothes and I like to go to beach to play and if in winter go to the beach.

✓ I prefer hot weather best because I don't like to wear too many clothes and I like to go to the beach to play, but if I go to the beach in winter,

动词like后面需要用不定式to wear；too much用于不可数名词，clothes是可数名词复数，应使用too many；go to beach前需要加定冠词the；句子结构不完整，需补充主语和谓语。

× The wind is very heavy so that I cannot play well and the sunny is shining in summer days so I like playing on the beach.

✓ The wind is very strong so I cannot play well, and the sun is shining on summer days, so I like playing on the beach.

heavy通常形容重量，形容风应使用strong；sunny是形容词，名词应为sun；连接词so that用法不当，应改为so；句子需分开更清晰。

× I prefer dry weather more because in Guangzhou the weather is really, really wet in spring and the house had a lot of water.

✓ I prefer dry weather more because in Guangzhou the weather is really, really wet in spring and the houses have a lot of water.

house应使用复数houses；谓语动词与主语houses保持一致，使用have。

× That's my my many homework that enjoy in the water and it's not good for me, I think.

✓ That's why I have a lot of homework that gets wet in the water, and it's not good for me, I think.

原句结构混乱，表达不清，需调整句子结构使意思明确。

× Uh, I usually check in the weather for a car because, uh, I need to know what kind of clothes I need to wear tomorrow.

✓ Uh, I usually check the weather forecast because, uh, I need to know what kind of clothes I need to wear tomorrow.

check后不需要介词in；for a car无意义，应为check the weather forecast。

× I always see the weather forest car before the next day and I can, uh, put my clothes well on my bed.

✓ I always check the weather forecast for the next day and I can, uh, lay out my clothes well on my bed.

weather forest car是错误表达，应为weather forecast；put my clothes well表达不自然，改为lay out my clothes。

× I think the climate change is not only good for human but all of the natural views because if the weather change heavily they will influence many kind of things in the nature.

✓ I think climate change is not only bad for humans but also for all natural things because if the weather changes heavily, it will influence many kinds of things in nature.

climate change前不加the；human应为复数humans；all of the natural views表达不当，改为all natural things；weather change应为weather changes；many kind应为many kinds；in the nature改为in nature。

× No, I really like Guangzhou, so that I think Guangzhou is a very comfortable city for me.

✓ No, I really like Guangzhou, so I think Guangzhou is a very comfortable city for me.

so that用法不当，表示结果时应使用so。

× But if I can go to like Sanya, that place that is had a really, really shining sun, so I prefer go there.

✓ But if I can go to a place like Sanya, which has a really, really shining sun, I would prefer to go there.

is had用法错误，应为has；prefer后接动词需用不定式to go；句子时态和结构需调整。