天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。例如，'The weather where I live is changeable. Sometimes it rains and gets extremely cold, which makes people uncomfortable, so many prefer to stay indoors.'

示例: The weather where I live is quite changeable. Sometimes it rains heavily and becomes very cold, which makes people feel uncomfortable, so many choose to stay indoors.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，使用连词连接原因，并避免重复。例如，'I prefer hot weather because winters here are very cold and uncomfortable, even indoors.'

示例: I prefer hot weather because the winters where I live are extremely cold, and it's hard to stay warm even indoors.

建议: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，且内容不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并使用正确词汇。例如，'I prefer dry weather because the humidity in my hometown causes machines to break and makes the air and floors damp and smelly.'

示例: I prefer dry weather because the humidity in my hometown damages machines and makes the air and floors damp and unpleasant.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清。建议简洁明了地说明习惯和原因，使用正确词汇。例如，'Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because I often hang my clothes outside, so I need to know if it will rain to bring them indoors.'

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast daily because I usually hang my clothes outside, and I need to know if it will rain to bring them inside.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复。建议使用连贯句子表达观点，并避免重复。例如，'I think summers are getting hotter and winters colder, which is a bad sign because global warming is worsening.'

示例: I think summers are becoming hotter and winters colder, which is a bad sign because global warming is getting worse.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清。建议简洁表达愿望，说明原因，并使用正确词汇。例如，'Yes, I want to visit cities with different climates, especially Yunnan province, because the weather there is comfortable and the scenery is beautiful.'

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially Yunnan province, because the weather is very comfortable and the scenery is beautiful.

× Sometimes the weather is raining and extremely cold, so it's not it's very difficult to make people feel comfortable.

✓ Sometimes it is raining and extremely cold, so it's very difficult to make people feel comfortable.

The phrase 'the weather is raining' is incorrect because 'rain' is a verb that describes an action, not a state of the weather. The correct expression is 'it is raining'. Also, the phrase 'so it's not it's very difficult' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'so it's very difficult'.

× If I have to choose one, I prefer the hot weather because in where I live the weather it's super cold in the winter, people cannot get warm in the indoors and it's super uncomfortable.

✓ If I have to choose one, I prefer hot weather because where I live the weather is super cold in the winter, people cannot get warm indoors and it's super uncomfortable.

The phrase 'in where I live' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'where'. Also, 'get warm in the indoors' is incorrect; 'indoors' does not need 'the'. The correct phrase is 'get warm indoors'.

× I prefer dry better because in my hometown I always feel wet in the air and some machine will get broken because of the wet weather and the war get wet and floor get wet. It's first stink.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in my hometown I always feel moisture in the air and some machines get broken because of the wet weather, and the walls and floor get wet. It first stinks.

The phrase 'dry better' is incorrect; 'prefer dry weather' is correct. 'Feel wet in the air' should be 'feel moisture in the air'. 'Some machine will get broken' should be 'some machines get broken' to agree in number and tense. 'The war get wet' is likely a typo for 'the walls get wet'. 'It's first stink' is unclear; 'It first stinks' is a better attempt but still awkward; it likely means 'It smells bad first'.

× Actually I will check it every day because my clothings always on the bargaining so I need to check if it is odd it would be raining so I need to put it indoors.

✓ Actually, I check it every day because my clothes are always on the balcony, so I need to check if it is odd that it will be raining so I can put them indoors.

'Clothings' is incorrect; the correct plural is 'clothes'. 'On the bargaining' is likely a typo for 'on the balcony'. 'If it is odd it would be raining' is unclear; it should be 'if it is likely to rain'. Also, 'put it indoors' should be 'put them indoors' to refer to clothes.

× I think it's becoming more and more harder in the summer and one more colder in the winter.

✓ I think it's becoming harder and harder in the summer and colder and colder in the winter.

The phrase 'more and more harder' is incorrect because 'harder' is already comparative; 'harder and harder' is correct. Similarly, 'one more colder' is incorrect; 'colder and colder' is the correct form.

× Yes, I would like to visit our city that have different claims from where I live, especially Yunnan province, be the weather there is very comfortable all our decisions and make my body feels relaxed and I can see some very good scenery.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, especially Yunnan province, because the weather there is very comfortable, all our decisions make my body feel relaxed, and I can see some very good scenery.

'Our city' should be 'other cities' to indicate different places. 'Claims' is a typo for 'climates'. 'Be the weather' should be 'because the weather'. 'All our decisions' is unclear; likely intended 'all the conditions'. 'Make my body feels' should be 'make my body feel' because 'make' is followed by the base form of the verb.