天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and complete. Try to use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear contrast between summer and winter weather.

示例: The weather where I live is quite extreme. In the summer, the temperature often gets very hot, sometimes reaching above 45°C, which can be uncomfortable. However, in the winter, it becomes quite cold, with temperatures dropping to around 17°C, so warm clothing is necessary.

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and speak more clearly. Make sure your sentences are complete and coherent. Provide a clear reason for your preference and use linking words to explain your opinion.

示例: I prefer cold weather because the summer temperatures here are very high and uncomfortable. Cold weather, around 17°C, feels much better and more refreshing for me.

建议: Your answer is generally good but avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear words like 'PLA'. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: I prefer wet weather because it helps cool down the high temperatures, especially during summer. In contrast, dry weather can make the air feel very hot and uncomfortable, so rainy days feel more refreshing and pleasant to me.

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more complete. Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details about when and why you check the forecast.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I start my day. I find it helpful because it helps me decide what to wear and plan my activities. Although sometimes the forecasted temperature is different from what I actually experience, it is still useful.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking and provide specific effects of climate change with examples. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather in recent years. For example, there is less rain during some seasons and the summers have become much hotter than before.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your opinion clearly and provide reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: No, I would not like to visit other cities with different climates because I enjoy the weather and seasons where I live. I feel comfortable and happy with my local climate.

× The weather where I live quite extreme.

✓ The weather where I live is quite extreme.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and the adjective. Every complete sentence requires a verb to express a complete thought.

× In the summer, near temperature often gets very hot, sometimes reaching above 45°C, which can be uncomfortable.

✓ In the summer, the temperature often gets very hot, sometimes reaching above 45°C, which can be uncomfortable.

The preposition 'near' is incorrectly used here. The correct article 'the' should be used before 'temperature' to specify the particular temperature being discussed.

× On the other hands, winter are quite cold with the temperature dropping to around 17°C, making is necessary to.

✓ On the other hand, winter is quite cold with the temperature dropping to around 17°C, making it necessary to wear warm clothes.

The phrase should be 'on the other hand' (singular). 'Winter' is singular, so the verb should be 'is'. The sentence is incomplete and needs a proper ending to make sense.

× winter are quite cold with the temperature dropping to around 17°C, making is necessary to.

✓ Winter is quite cold with the temperature dropping to around 17°C, making it necessary to wear warm clothes.

The subject 'winter' is singular and requires the singular verb 'is'. Also, 'making is necessary to' is incorrect; it should be 'making it necessary to' followed by an action.

× I prefer cold, uh, weather because, uh, here in summer is the 2 uh, high, high temperature cold is around 17 is a good, uh, for here.

✓ I prefer cold weather because here in summer the temperature is very high, and cold weather around 17°C is good for here.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to clearly express the preference and comparison of temperatures.

× I prefer wet weather because it helps to cool down the high temperatures, especially during the summer. Dry weather can make the air feel very hot and uncomfortable, so I find rain days more refreshing and PLA, uh, pleasant.

✓ I prefer wet weather because it helps to cool down the high temperatures, especially during the summer. Dry weather can make the air feel very hot and uncomfortable, so I find rainy days more refreshing and pleasant.

'Rain days' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'rainy' to describe days with rain. Also, 'PLA' seems to be a filler or error and should be removed.

× Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning when I go to I before I start my day. I find the he helpful because it helps me decide what uh to wear and plan my activities.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I start my day. I find it helpful because it helps me decide what to wear and plan my activities.

The original sentence contains incomplete and confusing phrases like 'when I go to I' and 'I find the he helpful'. These need to be corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes the temperature show on the forecast is different from the that I actually experience, but it still.

✓ Sometimes the temperature shown on the forecast is different from what I actually experience, but it still helps.

'Show' should be in past participle form 'shown' to agree with 'temperature'. 'The that' is incorrect; 'what' is the correct relative pronoun here. The sentence was incomplete and needs a proper ending.

× Uh, I think, uh, I think, uh, climate changes in, uh, in the recent year, uh, it's uh, right now N rain, uh, and uh, in the winter, I like the summer, it's too hot.

✓ I think climate has changed in recent years. Right now, there is more rain, and in the winter, I like it, but the summer is too hot.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Climate changes in the recent year' should be 'climate has changed in recent years' to express present perfect tense. Also, 'N rain' is unclear and corrected to 'there is more rain'.

× Absolutely no, because my steer. I like my steer for every weather and every season. It's good to me.

✓ Absolutely not, because my city is my home. I like my city in every weather and every season. It's good for me.

'Steer' is likely a mispronunciation or error for 'city' or 'area'. 'No' should be 'not' to answer the question properly. 'It's good to me' should be 'It's good for me' to express suitability.