天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连接词使内容显得有些断裂。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强句子之间的连贯性，并丰富细节描述。

示例: I live in Guangdong province, which is in the south of China. Because it is near the ocean, it rains a lot, especially during the summer months.

建议: 回答表达了个人偏好并给出了原因，但句子结构稍显简单，且有语法错误（this feel应为this feels）。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇。

示例: Actually, I prefer cold weather because I tend to sweat a lot in summer, which makes my clothes wet and uncomfortable.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“wet weather is associated with rainy”应改为“wet weather is associated with rain”。此外，句子较长且缺少连接词，建议分句并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I prefer dry weather because, in my opinion, wet weather is usually rainy, and I don't like rain. Therefore, if possible, I would move from Guangdong to northern China, where the weather is drier.

建议: 时态使用不当（had应为have），表达不够自然。建议使用现在时态，并改进时间表达，如“after I get up”而非“when I get up”。

示例: Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I usually check it in the morning after I get up and again in the afternoon after lunch.

建议: 表达不够准确，“didn't notice this news”不自然，且时态混乱。建议使用更准确的表达并注意时态一致。

示例: Actually, I haven't paid much attention to the news, but I can feel that the temperature has been rising, which has led to the melting of polar ice caps and glaciers.

建议: 句子结构不够自然，缺少必要的连接词，且“different climate”应为“different climates”。建议调整句子结构并使用复数形式。

示例: Yes, I like dry weather; therefore, I would like to visit other cities with different climates from where I live, such as Hawaii and Hainan.

× I live in Guangdong province, the South of China.

✓ I live in Guangdong province, in the south of China.

这里需要在“the South of China”前加介词“in”，表示“在中国南部”。

× Actually I prefer cold weather because I always sweat in summer so it makes my clothes wet and this feel awful.

✓ Actually, I prefer cold weather because I always sweat in summer, so it makes my clothes wet and this feels awful.

“this feel awful”中主语是单数“this”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“feels”。

× So if possible I will leave Guangdong to the north of China where the weather is dry.

✓ So if possible, I will leave Guangdong for the north of China where the weather is dry.

动词“leave”后面接表示目的地时应使用介词“for”，而不是“to”。

× Yes, I had the habit of checking the weather forecast.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast.

这里表达的是现在的习惯，应使用现在完成时或一般现在时，“had”是过去时，不符合语境。

× I always check the weather forecast from the morning to afternoon, like when I get up or when I finish the lunch.

✓ I always check the weather forecast from morning to afternoon, like when I get up or when I finish lunch.

“from the morning to afternoon”中“the”不需要；“finish the lunch”中“the”也不需要，通常说“finish lunch”。

× Actually I didn't notice this news but I can feel the temperature is higher and higher and it led to the melting of polar ice cap and glaciers.

✓ Actually, I didn't notice this news but I can feel the temperature is getting higher and higher and it has led to the melting of the polar ice cap and glaciers.

“led”应使用现在完成时“has led”，因为影响仍在持续；“polar ice cap”前应加定冠词“the”。

× Yes, I like dry weather, therefore I will try to visit other cities like Hawaii, Hainan which is different climate from where I live.

✓ Yes, I like dry weather, therefore I will try to visit other cities like Hawaii and Hainan, which have different climates from where I live.

“Hawaii, Hainan which is different climate”中应使用复数“climates”，且“Hawaii”和“Hainan”之间应加连词“and”。