天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'sweetie' (có thể bạn muốn nói 'sweaty') và 'by but it's typically' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: The weather in Hanoi is usually very hot and humid, especially in summer. Because of the intense heat, I often feel uncomfortable and sweaty, so I take showers twice a day to stay fresh. Although this weather can be tiring, it is typical for my city.

建议: Bạn nên tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như 'I have like the hot temperature' và 'playing footballs or volleyballs'. Hãy nói rõ ràng, dùng từ đúng và câu ngắn gọn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

示例: To be honest, I prefer hot weather because I am very active. I enjoy outdoor activities like playing football or volleyball since I am a big fan of sports.

建议: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có lỗi nhỏ như 'makes everyday taste like drying clothes much easier' không chính xác. Bạn nên dùng từ phù hợp hơn và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I prefer dry weather because it makes drying clothes much easier. For example, when it's sunny and dry, my laundry dries quickly without using a dryer. Also, dry weather is more comfortable since it is cooler and less humid, so I don't feel sticky or sweaty.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'due to decide' và 'rest accordingly with avoid'. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Tránh câu bị ngắt quãng không cần thiết.

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going to school. It helps me plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to bring an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I make sure to prepare accordingly to avoid getting caught in bad weather.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'has significantly impact' nên là 'has significantly impacted' và từ 'serve' nên là 'severe'. Ngoài ra, 'dogs' có thể là lỗi đánh máy của 'droughts'. Hãy dùng từ chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp.

示例: In recent years, climate change has significantly impacted the environment and society. For example, we have seen more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have caused serious damage to communities and ecosystems.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'has has' và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu cuối nên rõ ràng hơn về ý định tương lai.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. For example, Tokyo is at the top of my list because it has snow in winter, which I have never seen before. Maybe one day, it will be my dream city to settle down in the future.

× At this time of year, the heat is quite intense which makes me feel uncomfortable and sweetie, so I often have to take a shower twice a day to stay fresh.

✓ At this time of year, the heat is quite intense which makes me feel uncomfortable and sweaty, so I often have to take a shower twice a day to stay fresh.

The word 'sweetie' is incorrect here; the correct adjective to describe feeling hot and moist is 'sweaty'. This is a vocabulary error involving adjective choice.

× This kind of weather can be quite tiring by but it's typically.

✓ This kind of weather can be quite tiring, but it's typical.

The sentence contains an unnecessary word 'by' and lacks clarity. Removing 'by' and adjusting the sentence structure improves readability and correctness.

× And to be honest, I would prefer hot weather and because I'm a very active person and I have like the hot temperature so I can go outside and do activity outdoors like playing footballs or volleyballs because I'm a big fan of sport.

✓ To be honest, I would prefer hot weather because I'm a very active person and I like hot temperatures so I can go outside and do activities outdoors like playing football or volleyball because I'm a big fan of sports.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'and' and incorrect phrases like 'I have like the hot temperature'. Also, 'footballs' and 'volleyballs' should be singular when referring to the sports. Correcting conjunction use and noun forms improves clarity and grammar.

× I have like the hot temperature so I can go outside and do activity outdoors like playing footballs or volleyballs because I'm a big fan of sport.

✓ I like hot temperatures so I can go outside and do activities outdoors like playing football or volleyball because I'm a big fan of sports.

The plural forms 'footballs' and 'volleyballs' are incorrect when referring to the sports; the correct forms are 'football' and 'volleyball'. Also, 'sport' should be plural 'sports' when referring generally.

× I prefer dry weather because it makes everyday taste like drying clothes much easier.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it makes drying clothes every day much easier.

The phrase 'makes everyday taste like drying clothes' is incorrect. The intended meaning is that drying clothes every day is easier. Correcting preposition and word order clarifies the sentence.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I go to school and I find it very helpful to plan my day, especially due to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before I go to school and I find it very helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

The phrase 'due to decide' is incorrect; the correct infinitive form is 'to decide'. This is a misuse of verb form after 'especially'.

× If rain is expected, I make sure to rest accordingly with avoid getting caught in bad weather.

✓ If rain is expected, I make sure to rest accordingly to avoid getting caught in bad weather.

The phrase 'rest accordingly with avoid' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' before the verb 'avoid'. This fixes the prepositional error.

× In recent years, climate change has significantly impact on the environment and society.

✓ In recent years, climate change has significantly impacted the environment and society.

The verb 'impact' should be in the past participle form 'impacted' to agree with the present perfect tense 'has'. This is a past tense issue.

× Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and serve weather events such as hurricanes, floods and dogs, which have caused significant damage to communities and ecosystems.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods and droughts, which have caused significant damage to communities and ecosystems.

The word 'serve' is a misspelling of 'severe'. Also, 'dogs' is incorrect and should be 'droughts'. These are vocabulary errors involving adjectives and nouns.

× For example Tokyo would be my top list.

✓ For example, Tokyo would be at the top of my list.

The phrase 'my top list' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'at the top of my list'. Also, a comma after 'For example' is needed.

× This city has has snow in the winter which I have never seen in my life.

✓ This city has snow in the winter, which I have never seen in my life.

The repeated word 'has' is a typo and should be corrected. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the relative clause.

× Maybe this will be my dream city to settle down in my future.

✓ Maybe this will be my dream city to settle down in in the future.

The phrase 'in my future' is awkward; the correct expression is 'in the future'. Also, 'to settle down in in the future' is acceptable though repetitive; alternatively, 'where I will settle down in the future' could be used.