天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免口语化表达如“you know”，并且注意语法错误，如冠词使用（the Wuhan应为Wuhan）。建议回答更简洁自然，避免重复表达“very hot”和“very uncomfortable”。

示例: The weather in Wuhan is usually very hot during the summer, which can make people feel uncomfortable.

建议: 回答内容前后矛盾，表达不清晰。应直接表达偏好，并用具体理由支持。避免语法错误和不自然表达，如“Personal speaking”和“in the hot weather I need”。

示例: I prefer cold weather because hot days often make me feel uncomfortable, but I can relax by drinking cold beverages when it's hot.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“played a vague with”。应直接表达偏好并给出具体原因，避免模糊和不连贯的句子。

示例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin feel uncomfortable and dry, although too much rain can be annoying.

建议: 回答不连贯且含有填充词“uh”，表达不清晰。应明确说明习惯和频率，并用连贯句子表达原因。

示例: I usually check the weather forecast every day because it helps me plan my activities and feel prepared.

建议: 回答内容较好，但语法和表达需改进，如“many species are in extinction”应为“many species are becoming extinct”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式。

示例: In recent years, the weather has become hotter, causing many areas to experience extreme heat, which affects people and leads to the extinction of some species.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“read this other cities”和“which made me unforgettable”。应使用正确的表达方式，并简洁明了地说明理由和经历。

示例: Definitely. I would like to visit cities with different climates because it is interesting. For example, I have been to Guilin, which has a different climate from my hometown, and I had a wonderful and unforgettable experience there.

× The weather in my area is getting hot now because, you know, the weather in the Wuhan is usually very hot in summer, so people will feel very uncomfortable.

✓ The weather in my area is getting hot now because, you know, the weather in Wuhan is usually very hot in summer, so people will feel very uncomfortable.

“the Wuhan”中的“the”是不必要的，地名前一般不加定冠词，除非是特定的情况。这里应去掉“the”。

× Personal speaking, I prefer hot weather, considering that in the whole hot days I will feel very unhappy and very uncomfortable.

✓ Personally speaking, I prefer hot weather, considering that on the whole hot days I feel very unhappy and very uncomfortable.

“Personal speaking”应为副词短语“Personally speaking”，且“in the whole hot days”应改为“on the whole hot days”，表示在整个炎热的日子里。

× Personally speaking I played a vague with considering that in the dry areas my skins will feel very uncomfortable so that I think I will be ugly.

✓ Personally speaking, I have a vague feeling that in dry areas my skin feels very uncomfortable, so I think I will look ugly.

“played a vague with”表达错误，应为“have a vague feeling”；“in the dry areas”应为“in dry areas”；“my skins”应为“my skin”，皮肤不可数。

× I usually check the weather forecast because uh, now it's uh, in advance will make me feel comfortable and I often take it every day.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast because knowing it in advance makes me feel comfortable, and I often check it every day.

原句结构混乱，“now it's uh, in advance”不通顺，应改为“knowing it in advance”；“take it”应为“check it”，动词使用错误。

× In recent years, the weather is getting hotter and hotter, so most of the areas in the world are becoming scorching hot that many people can't stand it and many species are in extinction.

✓ In recent years, the weather has been getting hotter and hotter, so most areas in the world have become scorching hot that many people can't stand it and many species are becoming extinct.

“In recent years”表示从过去到现在的持续动作，应使用现在完成时“has been getting”；“are becoming scorching hot”改为“have become scorching hot”更符合语境；“many species are in extinction”应为“many species are becoming extinct”，表达物种正在灭绝。

× Definitely, yes. I would like to read this other cities that have different climates from my hometown because it's very interesting. For example, I had been to the Guilin where had a different climate from my hometown and I had a wonderful experience there which made me unforgettable.

✓ Definitely, yes. I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from my hometown because it's very interesting. For example, I have been to Guilin, which has a different climate from my hometown, and I had a wonderful experience there which was unforgettable.

“read this other cities”错误，应为“visit other cities”；“I had been to the Guilin”中“the”不应加，且时态应为现在完成时“have been”；“where had a different climate”缺少主语，应为“which has a different climate”；“made me unforgettable”表达错误，应为“was unforgettable”。