天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达稍显不自然，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意语法准确性。

示例: I live in Adelaide, where the weather is generally warm and dry. Summers can be very hot, sometimes exceeding 40 degrees Celsius, while winters are mild with occasional rain. Overall, I find the climate quite pleasant.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，且部分内容重复。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，避免口语化词汇。

示例: I prefer hot weather because I come from northern China, where winters are extremely cold. I have to wear many layers, which can be uncomfortable and makes going outside difficult.

建议: 回答中存在用词错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确的词汇，避免重复，并使句子更连贯。

示例: I definitely prefer dry weather because it's easier to manage. When the air is too humid, things can smell musty and mold can grow, which is difficult to handle.

建议: 回答中时态使用不当，表达重复且不够简洁。建议使用正确时态，避免重复，并使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every day before leaving home. It helps me decide what clothes to wear, so it's an important part of my daily routine.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的时态和句型，表达更具体的内容。

示例: Although I'm not sure about other places, I have noticed clear changes in my hometown. Winters have become warmer compared to when I was young, and summers now have more rainy days than before. This is a significant difference.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意主谓一致，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I would love to experience different climates in other cities. Both Los Angeles, where I live, and my hometown have mild weather, so I'm curious about how people cope with extreme weather elsewhere.

× In the summer the weather is pretty hot, can over 40° sometimes, but winter is quite warm and with some raining.

✓ In the summer the weather is pretty hot, it can be over 40° sometimes, but winter is quite warm with some rain.

句子中缺少主语和谓语，导致语法错误。'can over 40°'应改为'it can be over 40°'，'with some raining'应改为'with some rain'，因为'raining'是动名词，名词形式应为'rain'。

× but winter is quite warm and with some raining.

✓ but winter is quite warm with some rain.

'with some raining'中'raining'用法不当，应使用名词'rain'，表示'有一些雨'。

× I think it's the climate is quite pleasant here.

✓ I think the climate is quite pleasant here.

句中'it's the climate'结构重复，'it's'和'the climate'指代重复，应去掉'it's'。

× Every time I went out, I need to wear many layers of clothes, which make everything so frustrated and it's a big task to go out.

✓ Every time I went out, I needed to wear many layers of clothes, which made everything so frustrating and it was a big task to go out.

时态不一致，前半句用过去时，后半句应保持过去时。'need'应改为'needed'，'make'改为'made'，'frustrated'应为形容词'frustrating'，'it's'改为'it was'。

× which make everything so frustrated

✓ which made everything so frustrating

'frustrated'是形容词，表示感到沮丧的人，句中应使用形容词'frustrating'，表示令人沮丧的事物。

× I definitely pray for dry weather because if you feel dry you can just apply some moisturizer and use your familiar humid humidifier.

✓ I definitely prefer dry weather because if the air is dry you can just apply some moisturizer and use your familiar humidifier.

'pray for dry weather'用法不当，应该用'prefer dry weather'表示偏好。'feel dry'应改为'air is dry'更准确。

× use your familiar humid humidifier.

✓ use your familiar humidifier.

'humid humidifier'重复且不合适，'humidifier'本身是加湿器，不需要'adjective humid'修饰。

× But if the air is too wet, things started to smell musty and grow mold which is so hard to deal with.

✓ But if the air is too wet, things start to smell musty and grow mold which is so hard to deal with.

时态错误，前半句用一般现在时，'started'应改为'start'以保持时态一致。

× Yes, I almost checked the weather forecast every day before I leave my home because I need to know the weather, the temperature of that day, otherwise I don't know what to wear.

✓ Yes, I almost check the weather forecast every day before I leave my home because I need to know the weather, the temperature of that day, otherwise I don't know what to wear.

'checked'为过去式，与句中其他动词时态不符，应改为一般现在时'check'。

× Thanks for the weather forecast. I can wear the proper, proper clothes, which is kind of my one of my daily routine.

✓ Thanks to the weather forecast, I can wear the proper clothes, which is kind of one of my daily routines.

'proper, proper clothes'重复，应去掉一个'proper'。'my one of my daily routine'结构错误，应改为'one of my daily routines'。

× The weather, the winter weather became more become warmer compared to when I grow up and in the summer the rain for many days which haven't happened before.

✓ The winter weather has become warmer compared to when I grew up, and in the summer it rains for many days which hasn't happened before.

时态错误，'became more become warmer'重复且错误，应改为'has become warmer'。'grow up'应为过去式'grew up'。'the rain for many days'应改为'it rains for many days'。'which haven't happened'主语为单数，谓语应为'hasn't happened'。

× Yes, of course I really want to experience some different climate and weather in different cities.

✓ Yes, of course I really want to experience some different climates and weather in different cities.

'some different climate'中'climate'应为复数形式'climates'，因为指多个不同的气候。

× But to be honest, where I'm live in LA and my hometown, both of them are quite liveable places and the weather there are not extreme.

✓ But to be honest, where I live in LA and my hometown, both of them are quite liveable places and the weather there is not extreme.

'I'm live'错误，应为'I live'。'the weather there are'主谓不一致，'weather'为单数，谓语应为'is'。