天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear vocabulary, which affects clarity. Try to use correct and relevant words to describe the weather, and keep your sentences concise and coherent. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is natural and easy to understand.

示例: The weather where I live is mostly mild throughout the year. For example, summers are comfortable, allowing people to spend more time outdoors. Additionally, we get a lot of rainfall in spring, which keeps the environment green and fresh.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and avoid unnecessary repetition.

示例: I definitely prefer cold weather, especially in winter, because I find it much more comfortable than hot weather. During summer, the heat can be unbearable, so I often stay indoors with air conditioning to keep cool.

建议: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to improve clarity. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: I definitely prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient. For example, on rainy days, I have to wear waterproof shoes and extra clothes, which can be inconvenient. Also, wet weather sometimes makes me feel a bit down and can affect my health.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your sentences clearly and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid repeating the question in your answer and focus on providing a direct response with supporting details.

示例: Yes, checking the weather forecast is part of my daily routine. I usually check it before going out or choosing my clothes, so I can decide what to wear or whether to bring an umbrella.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically and use accurate vocabulary related to climate change. Provide specific examples and explain their impact clearly to improve your response.

示例: Climate change has affected the environment and human life in many ways. For example, extreme weather events like typhoons have become more frequent, causing significant damage to infrastructure and disrupting communication networks.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward expressions. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, provide more specific reasons or details to support your answer.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially those with cooler summers. For example, I would love to visit South Korea because its summers are milder compared to Taiwan.

× The weather on where I live is generally mud and placed throughout the year.

✓ The weather where I live is generally mild and pleasant throughout the year.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used before 'where I live'. The correct phrase is 'The weather where I live'. Also, 'mud and placed' seems to be a typo or incorrect word choice; 'mild and pleasant' fits the context better.

× For example, summer make it comfortable and spend more outdoor time.

✓ For example, summer makes it comfortable and allows spending more time outdoors.

The subject 'summer' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). Also, 'spend more outdoor time' is awkward; it should be 'allows spending more time outdoors'.

× Additionally, we expect more than rainfall during the spring which keep the environment green and fresh.

✓ Additionally, we expect more rainfall during the spring, which keeps the environment green and fresh.

The phrase 'more than rainfall' is incorrect; it should be 'more rainfall'. Also, 'which keep' should be 'which keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'rainfall'.

× I definitely prefer cold weather, especially winter because I felt it much more comfortable than customer.

✓ I definitely prefer cold weather, especially winter, because I feel it much more comfortable than summer.

The verb 'felt' is past tense but the context is present preference, so 'feel' is correct. Also, 'customer' is a wrong word here; it should be 'summer'.

× During the summer the heat can be unbearable so I readily spend more of my time in the with the air conditioning and to stay cool.

✓ During the summer, the heat can be unbearable, so I readily spend more of my time with the air conditioning to stay cool.

The phrase 'in the with the air conditioning' is incorrect; it should be 'with the air conditioning'. Also, 'and to stay cool' is better connected without 'and'.

× For instance, on rainy day, I have to wear waterproof shoes and extra clothes, which can be inconvenient.

✓ For instance, on rainy days, I have to wear waterproof shoes and extra clothes, which can be inconvenient.

The phrase 'on rainy day' should be plural 'on rainy days' to indicate general situations.

× Additionally, wet water often make me feel a bit sad and can sometimes affect my health.

✓ Additionally, wet weather often makes me feel a bit sad and can sometimes affect my health.

'Wet water' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'wet weather'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'wet weather'.

× Definitely checking the weather forecast is one of my daily routine.

✓ Definitely, checking the weather forecast is part of my daily routine.

The phrase 'one of my daily routine' is incorrect; it should be 'part of my daily routine'.

× I always see the weather forecast as soon as I need to go out or before I wearing clothes.

✓ I always check the weather forecast as soon as I need to go out or before I wear clothes.

The verb 'wearing' is incorrectly used after 'before I'; it should be the base form 'wear'. Also, 'see' is better replaced with 'check' in this context.

× English near climate change has had effect on environment and human life.

✓ Recently, climate change has had an effect on the environment and human life.

'English near' is incorrect and likely a typo; 'Recently' fits the context. Also, 'has had effect' needs the article 'an' before 'effect', and 'environment' needs the definite article 'the'.

× First, we have water more frequent as very different weather events such as a typhoon, which have caused significant damage to communication work.

✓ First, we have more frequent water-related and very different weather events such as typhoons, which have caused significant damage to communication networks.

The phrase 'water more frequent as very different weather events' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to 'more frequent water-related and very different weather events'. 'Typhoon' should be plural 'typhoons' to agree with 'events'. 'Communication work' is better expressed as 'communication networks'.

× Yes, I'm sure I'll be willing to visit other cities, which is not getting very hotter in summer.

✓ Yes, I'm sure I'll be willing to visit other cities, which are not getting much hotter in summer.

The relative clause refers to 'cities' (plural), so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'very hotter' is incorrect; 'much hotter' is the correct comparative form.

× For instance, I will really love to visit like for example South Korea.

✓ For instance, I would really love to visit places like South Korea.

The phrase 'visit like for example South Korea' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'visit places like South Korea' or simply 'visit South Korea'.

× I think the summer in South Korea wouldn't be harder than in Taiwan.

✓ I think the summer in South Korea wouldn't be hotter than in Taiwan.

The adjective 'harder' is incorrect in this context; the correct comparative adjective for temperature is 'hotter'.