天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“we are not leaving Fuzhou”应为“we are living in Fuzhou”。同时，回答应更简洁自然，避免重复和冗长。

示例: I live in Fuzhou, where the weather is quite changeable. For example, it can be sunny one moment and raining heavily the next. Although I don't like the unpredictable weather, I enjoy the moist air because it makes my skin feel comfortable.

建议: 回答时应注意语法和词汇的准确使用，如“full of energetic”应为“full of energy”。同时，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I prefer hot weather because on sunny days I can stay indoors and enjoy the air conditioning. Also, I feel more energetic in the heat, whereas cold weather makes me feel lethargic.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，应简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

示例: I definitely prefer wet weather. My hometown Wuhan is quite dry because it is inland, which makes my skin itchy. In contrast, Fuzhou is near the sea, and the moist air there makes me feel more comfortable.

建议: 回答应避免重复，句子应更流畅自然。可以用连接词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day, especially if I plan to go hiking or do outdoor activities. Sometimes, I even check it several times a day to stay updated.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。应使用正确时态和句型，避免重复词汇，内容应更具体。

示例: I believe climate change has affected everyone. For example, my friend in England told me that the weather there has been hotter than usual in recent years. Overall, the global temperature seems to be rising.

建议: 回答不完整且表达混乱，应完整表达想法，避免语法错误，并使用恰当词汇。

示例: Definitely, I have always dreamed of visiting northern China because I want to experience snowy weather and see traditional northern architecture.

× We are not leaving Fuzhou, The weather is quite fickle.

✓ We do not live in Fuzhou, the weather is quite fickle.

这里学生想表达“我们不住在福州”，但用了现在进行时“are not leaving”，应使用一般现在时“do not live”表示习惯或事实。

× Maybe just now it's a big sunny day and the last time you know, it's raining heavily.

✓ Maybe just now it's a big sunny day, but last time, you know, it was raining heavily.

句中连接词用错，前后句意思转折，应使用“but”而非“and”。

× So actually I think I don't like the weather, but I like the moisture feeling.

✓ So actually I think I don't like the weather, but I like the moist feeling.

“moisture feeling”搭配不当，应使用形容词“moist”修饰“feeling”。

× It made my skin feel comfortable.

✓ It makes my skin feel comfortable.

描述习惯性事实应使用一般现在时“makes”，且“comfortable”用法正确。

× Actually I prefer hot weather because in hot days I can stay indoors enjoying the air conditioning and always full of energetic in sunny days, while in cold days I just feel lethargic.

✓ Actually I prefer hot weather because on hot days I can stay indoors enjoying the air conditioning and always feel full of energy on sunny days, while on cold days I just feel lethargic.

介词“in hot days”应为“on hot days”；“full of energetic”搭配错误，应为“full of energy”。

× Well, I definitely enjoying well weather because you know in my hometown Wuhan, the weather is too dry because the place is located in the central China, so isn't by which isn't by the sea, which made my skin itch well in Fuzhou where I feel more comfortable by the sea.

✓ Well, I definitely enjoy good weather because, you know, in my hometown Wuhan, the weather is too dry because the place is located in central China, so it isn't by the sea, which makes my skin itch. Well, in Fuzhou, where I feel more comfortable by the sea.

“I definitely enjoying”应为“I definitely enjoy”；“well weather”应为“good weather”；“isn't by which isn't by the sea”语法混乱，应改为“it isn't by the sea”；“made”时态应为“makes”。

× I usually check the weather forecast. I usually check I think every day if I need to go hiking or some activity outdoors.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast. I think I check it every day if I need to go hiking or do some outdoor activities.

“some activity outdoors”搭配不当，应为“some outdoor activities”；重复“usually check”应简化。

× I maybe check from hour to hour, maybe several times a day.

✓ I may check from hour to hour, maybe several times a day.

“maybe”用作副词表示“也许”，此处应使用情态动词“may”表示可能性。

× Actually, I think the the climate change has affected everyone.

✓ Actually, I think the climate change has affected everyone.

句中重复“the”是笔误，需删除多余的“the”。

× I realize that the weather in England was hotter than usual years and my friend in England also shared the news to me.

✓ I realize that the weather in England has been hotter than usual in recent years, and my friend in England also shared the news with me.

“was hotter than usual years”表达不完整，应为“has been hotter than usual in recent years”；“shared the news to me”搭配错误，应为“shared the news with me”。

× I think the overall weather become warmer and outside.

✓ I think the overall weather has become warmer recently.

“become”应使用完成时态“has become”；“and outside”无意义，应删除。

× Definitely, I always dreamed of visiting other activities in north part of China because I really want to see the snowy things like, you know, the building's Norsemen or do the.

✓ Definitely, I have always dreamed of visiting other places in the northern part of China because I really want to see snowy things like, you know, the buildings, snowmen, or do snow activities.

“other activities”应为“other places”；“north part”应为“northern part”；“building's Norsemen”错误，应为“buildings, snowmen”；“do the”不完整，应补充为“do snow activities”。