天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“oftenly”应为“often”，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: The weather where I live is mild, and it often rains from March to July.

建议: 回答较长且有语法错误，如“it make me”应为“it makes me”。建议简洁表达原因，并注意主谓一致。

示例: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me sweat, which is uncomfortable when my clothes stick to my skin.

建议: 表达不清晰，“as a motion”不合适，且句子结构不完整。建议直接表达观点并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

示例: I prefer dry weather because, as I mentioned before, I don't like when my shirt sticks to my skin.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I usually don't check the weather forecast, except when I travel or go hiking.

建议: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，缺少具体细节。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并提供具体影响。

示例: In my opinion, climate change has caused problems like animal extinction and has affected people's daily lives.

建议: 回答中有重复，句子未完成，表达不连贯。建议简洁表达愿望，避免重复，并完成句子。

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I prefer drier and colder weather, unlike the hot weather in my town.

× It's around medium temperature and it will rain oftenly during March from March to July.

✓ It's around medium temperature and it will rain often from March to July.

'oftenly' 不是正确的副词形式，正确的副词是 'often'。副词用法错误。

× I prefer cold weather because the hot weather will lead to sweat and it make me feel uncomfortable to have sweat T-shirts which will attach to my skin.

✓ I prefer cold weather because the hot weather will lead to sweat and it makes me feel uncomfortable to have sweat T-shirts which will stick to my skin.

主谓不一致，主语是 'it'，谓语动词应为 'makes'。另外，'attach' 用于衣服贴身应改为 'stick' 更合适。

× I prefer dry weather as a motion.

✓ I prefer dry weather as a notion.

'motion' 意为动作，语境应为 'notion'（观念、想法），这里是词汇用法错误。

× I I only check the weather forecast when I when I travel, when I go travel or go hiking.

✓ I only check the weather forecast when I travel or go hiking.

重复使用 'I'，且 'go travel' 不正确，应简化为 'travel'。代词和表达重复错误。

× In my perspective, the implication of climate change in recent years are, among farm animals, extinctions to human life, to human daily lives.

✓ In my perspective, the implications of climate change in recent years are, among farm animals, extinctions to human life and daily lives.

'implication' 应为复数 'implications'，与谓语 'are' 一致。名词单复数错误。

× Yes, I would I would like to visit other cities which have different climate because I prefer I prefer more drier, more dry and cold weather and in my town the weather is hot and.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities which have different climates because I prefer drier and colder weather, and in my town the weather is hot.

'climate' 应为复数 'climates'，'more drier' 是错误的比较级表达，应为 'drier'，'more dry' 也不正确，应为 'drier'，形容词比较级错误。