天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免语法错误和多余词汇，句子应更流畅自然。例如，“We and I feel really scorching”表达不清，应改为“it feels really scorching”。

示例: I live in southern China, where the temperature is quite high, especially in summer when it reaches around 30°C. It often feels very scorching during that time.

建议: 回答中应避免数字错误和语法错误，且表达应更自然。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I prefer hot weather because, although it can be very warm, I enjoy going to the beach and sunbathing. Also, I like wearing pretty skirts when I go out with my friends.

建议: 回答应完整且语法正确，避免句子未完成。建议补充具体细节并使用连接词。

示例: I prefer dry weather because I dislike humid conditions that make my clothes and skin sticky. Also, in humid weather, I have to wash my hair daily because it gets oily quickly.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词，应注意时态和句子结构，表达更清晰自然。

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out so I can decide what clothes to wear. If it is going to rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella to avoid getting wet.

建议: 回答应注意主谓一致和时态，句子应更完整且逻辑清晰。建议使用连接词丰富内容。

示例: Climate change has caused significant damage to our society. It has led to many natural disasters, such as flooding, which damages infrastructure and causes huge losses.

建议: 回答中应注意冠词和介词的使用，句子应更流畅自然，避免重复。

示例: Absolutely. I would like to visit northern China in the future to experience its snowy climate. There, I can enjoy beautiful scenery and go skiing.

× We and I feel really scorching.

✓ I feel really scorching.

句子中使用了“we and I”，这在语法上不正确且冗余，应只用“I”来表达单数第一人称。

× My favorite 1 is hot weather.

✓ My favorite is hot weather.

句子中“favorite 1”中的“1”是多余的，应去掉。

× I also can dress my pretty skirts with my friend.

✓ I can also wear my pretty skirts with my friend.

动词“dress”后面直接跟“my pretty skirts”不合适，应该用“wear”表示穿衣服；另外，“with my friend”表示和朋友一起，语法正确。

× My choice is going to be dry weather because I really dislike humid weather which made my clothes and skin really sticky and I need to wash my hair once a day because my hair is easy to.

✓ My choice is dry weather because I really dislike humid weather which makes my clothes and skin really sticky, and I need to wash my hair once a day because my hair gets oily easily.

句子中“made”应为现在时“makes”，因为描述的是一般事实；“is easy to”不完整，应补充完整表达“gets oily easily”。

× Yes, I usually watch the weather record before I going out because I need to decide what clothes I should wear and if if there is rainy day I need to bring my umbrella escape getting my clothes wrapped.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I go out because I need to decide what clothes I should wear, and if there is a rainy day, I need to bring my umbrella to avoid getting my clothes wet.

“watch the weather record”不自然，应改为“check the weather forecast”；“before I going out”应为“before I go out”；“if if”重复，应去掉一个；“rainy day”前应加冠词“a”；“escape getting my clothes wrapped”表达不当，应改为“avoid getting my clothes wet”。

× It damage to our society and it lead to a lot of natural disasters such as flooding, which damage our infrastructures and lead to a huge loss to our society.

✓ It damages our society and leads to a lot of natural disasters such as flooding, which damage our infrastructures and lead to huge losses to our society.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，动词应加-s变为“damages”和“leads”；“damage”作为关系代词引导的定语从句中动词保持原形正确；“a huge loss”应改为复数“huge losses”，因为是泛指多次损失。

× Absolutely, yes. I would like to go to the northern China in the future and experience it's snowy climate and I can see a lot of beautiful sceneries in the northern China. Besides I can skiing in there.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I would like to go to northern China in the future and experience its snowy climate, and I can see a lot of beautiful scenery there. Besides, I can ski there.

“the northern China”中“the”不应出现；“it's”应为物主代词“its”；“sceneries”应为不可数名词“scenery”；“in the northern China”应改为“there”；“I can skiing”应改为“I can ski”。