天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“in my hometown where I live”可以简化为“in my hometown”。此外，句子结构稍显复杂，建议使用更自然简洁的表达。

示例: These days, the weather in my hometown is quite uncomfortable because it's always cloudy and quite wet during the summer.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“do some a lot of things”应改为“do a lot of things”。另外，句子可以更流畅自然，避免重复。

示例: I prefer hot weather like in summer because I can swim and do many outdoor activities, but in cold winter, I usually stay at home.

建议: 回答中出现了双重否定“feel nothing uncomfortable”，表达不清晰。建议用更准确的词汇表达感受，并避免冗长。

示例: I definitely prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable, which I really dislike.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“I'm I don't have”和“in my home time”。建议简化句子，表达更清楚。

示例: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I have a car and can go anywhere without needing an umbrella.

建议: 回答中“the climate change caused the extreme weather”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并丰富细节。

示例: I think climate change has led to more extreme weather and higher temperatures. For example, summers feel much hotter than they used to be.

建议: 回答未完成且表达重复。建议完整回答问题，避免重复信息，并使用连贯的句子。

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because my hometown, Jinhua, is always wet due to its southern location, and I prefer drier weather.

× In these days in my hometown where I live, the weather is not so comfortable.

✓ These days in my hometown where I live, the weather is not very comfortable.

“In these days”用法不正确，应该用“These days”表示“最近这些天”。

× I can swim and do some a lot of things, but in winter, which is cold, I cannot do anything but staying at my home.

✓ I can swim and do a lot of things, but in winter, which is cold, I cannot do anything but stay at my home.

“some a lot of things”表达不正确，应为“a lot of things”。

× I cannot do anything but staying at my home.

✓ I cannot do anything but stay at my home.

“but”后面接动词原形，不能用动名词形式“staying”。

× Well I definitely prefer dry weather and I hate wet weather because in the wet weather I always feel nothing uncomfortable and I feel it is sticky on my body and I don't like this feeling.

✓ Well, I definitely prefer dry weather and I hate wet weather because in wet weather I always feel uncomfortable and I feel it is sticky on my body and I don't like this feeling.

“feel nothing uncomfortable”表达错误，应为“feel uncomfortable”，去掉“nothing”使句子通顺。

× Well, I'm I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because in my home time I have a car and I can drive without an umbrella where to wherever I want to go.

✓ Well, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because in my hometown I have a car and I can drive without an umbrella wherever I want to go.

“I'm I”是多余且错误的，应删除“I'm”；“home time”应为“hometown”；“where to wherever”表达重复，应简化为“wherever”。

× Well, in my life, the climate change caused the extreme weather and extreme temperatures for me.

✓ Well, in my life, climate change has caused extreme weather and extreme temperatures for me.

“climate change”作为不可数名词，且影响持续，应使用现在完成时“has caused”。

× Yes, I am looking forward to visiting other cities that have different climates from Xinhua because in Jinhua there is always wet weather because it is in the South of China. You know, I don't like wet weather, so I.

✓ Yes, I am looking forward to visiting other cities that have different climates from Xinhua because in Jinhua there is always wet weather since it is in the south of China. You know, I don't like wet weather, so I don't want to go there.

句子末尾不完整，应补充完整；“because”重复使用，第二处可用“since”替代使句子更流畅。