天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use more accurate vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, use 'hot' instead of 'hard' and 'comfortable' instead of 'confortable'. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: I live in Malaysia where the weather is mostly sunny and warm throughout the year. It is quite humid, and we often experience heavy rain during the monsoon season. Currently, the weather is sunny and moderately warm, which feels very comfortable.

建议: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer first, then support it with reasons. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, for example, say 'I don't prefer either hot or cold weather' and 'I prefer humid weather that is neither too hot nor too cool'. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

示例: I don't prefer either hot or cold weather. I like humid weather that is neither too hot nor too cool because it allows me to do my activities comfortably.

建议: Make sure your answer is complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain why wet weather is better for your skin and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, use appropriate vocabulary like 'affect' instead of 'effect'.

示例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin dry and uncomfortable. When the air is humid, it helps keep my skin moisturized and healthy.

建议: Try to structure your answer clearly by stating your habit first, then explaining when you check the forecast. Use correct grammar, for example, say 'I don't usually check the weather forecast because I don't find it very important, but I check it when there is heavy rain or strong sun.'

示例: I don't usually check the weather forecast because I don't find it very important. However, I do check it when there is heavy rain or very sunny weather.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response about the effects of climate change with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary and grammar. For example, mention increased heavy rains or floods as effects of climate change in Malaysia.

示例: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and heavy rains in Malaysia, especially at the end of the year. This has led to flooding and disrupted daily life.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correct vocabulary. For example, say 'Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to experience seasons like snow or spring, which we don't have in Malaysia.' Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to experience seasons like snow or spring, which we don't have in Malaysia. It would be interesting to see flowers blooming in spring and feel the cold weather.

× really is quite humid and sometimes we get heavy rain, especially during the monsoon season.

✓ it is really quite humid and sometimes we get heavy rain, especially during the monsoon season.

The sentence lacks a subject before 'is quite humid'. Adding 'it' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.

× At the moment it's sunny and it's not too hard, just moderate, so it's really quite confortable.

✓ At the moment it's sunny and it's not too hot, just moderate, so it's really quite comfortable.

The word 'hard' is incorrectly used instead of 'hot'. Also, 'confortable' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'comfortable'.

× If you ask me. To be honest, I do not prefer both of you, neither of it because I'm mostly like when it's humid with the weather is not too hard or too cool.

✓ If you ask me, to be honest, I do not prefer either of them because I mostly like when it's humid and the weather is not too hot or too cool.

'Both of you' and 'neither of it' are incorrect pronoun uses here. 'Either of them' is appropriate for two options. Also, 'like when it's humid with the weather is not too hard' is corrected to 'like when it's humid and the weather is not too hot' for clarity and correctness.

× So I can do my activity freely without.

✓ So I can do my activities freely without any problem.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'without'. Adding 'any problem' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× I would have preferred wet weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather.

The use of 'would have preferred' suggests a past conditional, but the context is about current preference. Using 'prefer' is more appropriate here.

× 'Cause when it's too dry. Everything is good for my skin as well as my skin is also dry.

✓ 'Cause when it's too dry, everything is bad for my skin as my skin also becomes dry.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'everything is good' but then mentions skin dryness. Correcting to 'bad' aligns with the intended meaning. Also, combining the two sentences improves flow.

× So when you don't have any like air droplets. On the table and it will effect my.

✓ So when there aren't any air droplets in the air, it will affect my skin.

'On the table' is incorrect in this context; 'in the air' is appropriate. Also, 'effect' should be 'affect' as a verb meaning to influence.

× To be honest, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast is gonna be like.

✓ To be honest, I don't have the habit of checking what the weather forecast is going to be like.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'what the weather forecast is going to be like' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× but when it's like there's a heavy rain or it's too sunny, then I will check it.

✓ but when there is heavy rain or it's too sunny, then I will check it.

The phrase 'it's like there's' is unnecessary and informal. Removing 'it's like' makes the sentence clearer and more grammatically correct.

× As I live in Malaysia mostly when is the end of the year there is very heavy rains will rain throughout at the anti team or usually clan tantrum, gangadhara and so on.

✓ As I live in Malaysia, mostly at the end of the year there is very heavy rain throughout the monsoon season, usually during the northeast monsoon and southwest monsoon, and so on.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear terms. Correcting the sentence structure and replacing unclear words with 'monsoon season' and 'northeast monsoon' improves clarity.

× And then also I'm from clan time which very.

✓ Also, I am from a place with a similar climate.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rewriting it to express the intended meaning improves understanding.

× Yes, I do because his militia V Eddie had when it's too hot or too cold, it's not very cool but it's like humid.

✓ Yes, I do because in Malaysia, when it's too hot or too cold, it's not very comfortable but it's usually humid.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronouns and words. Replacing 'his militia V Eddie had' with 'in Malaysia' and correcting the sentence improves clarity.

× I also want to feel how those when there's a snow or spring seasons, flower season and so on.

✓ I also want to experience what it is like when there is snow or during spring and flower seasons, and so on.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it to a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.