天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

示例: The weather in my hometown is mostly cloudy these days because it is the monsoon season. I find this weather quite refreshing as it cools down the temperature and brings a pleasant atmosphere.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and better grammar. Start with a direct answer, then use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to add details. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition.

示例: I prefer hot weather, especially during the summer season. For example, I enjoy eating ice cream which is mostly available in summer. Also, I have a variety of summer clothes that I like to wear, so hot weather suits me well.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly with a topic sentence, then explain your reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and check your sentence structure.

示例: Honestly, I do not like either dry or wet weather, but if I have to choose, I prefer wet weather. This is because I enjoy the rain and find it refreshing and enjoyable.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain when and why you check the weather forecast using linking words. Use simple and correct sentences.

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my mobile phone, especially when I have important work outside. This helps me to prepare and avoid any problems caused by bad weather.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence about the effects of climate change, then give specific examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

示例: In recent years, climate change has caused many problems. For instance, farmers face difficulties because of unpredictable weather, and many people lose their jobs due to these changes.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Start with a direct answer, then explain your reasons clearly using linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and check your grammar.

示例: Definitely, I would like to visit other cities with different climates from my hometown. I enjoy exploring new places and experiencing different weather conditions, so I hope to travel to such cities in the future.

× That I mentioned earlier, the weather of my hometown is a very cloudy during these days and that was a monsoon season where I find it quite refreshing for me.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, the weather in my hometown is very cloudy these days and it is the monsoon season, which I find quite refreshing.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'very cloudy' and 'monsoon season'. 'Very cloudy' is an adjective phrase and does not require 'a'. Also, 'monsoon season' is a specific season and should be preceded by 'the'. Additionally, 'weather of my hometown' should be 'weather in my hometown'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Indeed, I mostly prefer or summer season becauses there are various kinds of opportunities.

✓ Indeed, I mostly prefer the summer season because there are various kinds of opportunities.

The phrase 'or summer season' is incorrect; 'the summer season' is the correct form. Also, 'becauses' is a spelling error and should be 'because'. The quantifier 'various kinds of' is correct here.

× For instance, I'm mostly like ice cream which is available mostly in a summer season, so that's why I like a hot weather.

✓ For instance, I mostly like ice cream, which is mostly available in the summer season, so that's why I like hot weather.

The phrase 'I'm mostly like' is incorrect; it should be 'I mostly like'. Also, 'a summer season' should be 'the summer season' and 'a hot weather' should be 'hot weather' without an article. The pronoun usage and article usage are corrected.

× Apart from this, I have a variety of clothes of summer so that's why I like the hot weather.

✓ Apart from this, I have a variety of summer clothes, so that's why I like hot weather.

The phrase 'clothes of summer' is incorrect; it should be 'summer clothes'. Also, 'the hot weather' should be 'hot weather' without 'the' as it refers to weather in general. Pronoun and article usage are corrected.

× Honestly speaking I do not like both, but if I had to choose ones I prefer own wet weather becauses I like a rainy an good enjoyable things so that's why I like wait.

✓ Honestly speaking, I do not like either, but if I had to choose one, I prefer wet weather because I like rainy and enjoyable things, so that's why I like wet weather.

The phrase 'do not like both' should be 'do not like either' when referring to two options. 'Ones' should be 'one'. 'Own wet weather' is incorrect; 'wet weather' suffices. 'Becauses' is a spelling error for 'because'. 'A rainy an good enjoyable things' is incorrect; it should be 'rainy and enjoyable things'. 'Wait' is a typo for 'wet'. Pronoun and article usage, spelling, and word choice are corrected.

× Oh yes, I have a habit to checking the weather in a mobile phone because I think that when I have important work at the outside, so I mostly preferred to check becaused it's my work and I not like 2 novels and any kind of consequences faced in my life.

✓ Oh yes, I have a habit of checking the weather on my mobile phone because I think that when I have important work outside, I mostly prefer to check it because it's my work and I do not like any problems or consequences in my life.

The phrase 'habit to checking' should be 'habit of checking'. 'In a mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone'. 'At the outside' should be 'outside'. 'Mostly preferred' should be 'mostly prefer' to match present tense. 'Becaused' is a spelling error for 'because'. 'I not like 2 novels' is unclear and corrected to 'I do not like any problems'. Preposition and verb form errors are corrected.

× During during these days most of the individual face a problem of climate change becaused they do not know when and where it can happen.

✓ These days, most individuals face problems due to climate change because they do not know when and where it can happen.

The repetition 'During during' is incorrect and removed. 'Most of the individual' should be 'most individuals'. 'Face a problem of climate change' is better expressed as 'face problems due to climate change'. 'Becaused' is a spelling error for 'because'. Word choice and sentence structure are improved.

× But people can face a problem in a farming as well as in there working employment.

✓ But people can face problems in farming as well as in their employment.

The phrase 'a problem in a farming' is incorrect; it should be 'problems in farming'. 'There working employment' is incorrect; it should be 'their employment'. Pronoun and article usage are corrected.

× So these are mean effect.

✓ So these are the main effects.

'Mean effect' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'main effects'. Also, 'these are' should be followed by plural 'effects' to match the subject. Quantifier and word choice are corrected.

× Definitely I would like to visit at are other cities that have a different climates from my hometown because I am a hold of all person and I always like like to explore different kinds of things.

✓ Definitely, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from my hometown because I am fond of all people and I always like to explore different kinds of things.

The phrase 'visit at are other cities' is incorrect; it should be 'visit other cities'. 'A different climates' should be 'different climates' without 'a'. 'I am a hold of all person' is incorrect; it should be 'I am fond of all people'. The repeated 'like like' is corrected to 'like'. Preposition and word choice errors are corrected.

× So yes, in future if I got the chance to change my city for a few times. So definitely Apple.

✓ So yes, in the future, if I get the chance to change my city a few times, I definitely will.

The sentence is incomplete and fragmented. 'In future' should be 'in the future'. 'If I got' should be 'if I get' to match the conditional present/future tense. 'Change my city for a few times' is awkward; better is 'change my city a few times'. 'So definitely Apple' is unclear and corrected to 'I definitely will'. Sentence structure and clarity are improved.