天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 答えが少し不自然で、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「There is a rainy season called. See you in Japanese.」の部分は意味が不明瞭です。より明確で自然な表現を使い、文をつなぐ接続詞を活用しましょう。

示例: The weather where I live is mostly sunny, but during June and July, we have a rainy season called "tsuyu" in Japanese. During this time, the sky is often gloomy and cloudy, and it rains a lot, which makes me feel a bit unhappy.

建议: 答えは直接的で理解しやすいですが、文法の誤り（"closes"は"clothes"）や繰り返しが見られます。理由をもう少し具体的に述べ、接続詞を使って文を滑らかにしましょう。

示例: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I don't like feeling sweaty. Also, I enjoy wearing cute winter clothes, which makes the cold season more enjoyable for me.

建议: 発音の誤り（"wizard"は"weather"の誤りと思われます）や文法の問題があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

示例: I prefer wet weather to dry weather because I have dry eyes, and dry conditions make them uncomfortable.

建议: 文法的な誤りや冗長な表現が多いです。習慣について話す際は、現在形を使い、理由を明確に述べましょう。

示例: Honestly, I don't usually check the weather forecast, but sometimes I do when I want to plan my schedule or decide whether to go out.

建议: 内容は良いですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。具体的な影響を述べる際は、正しい文法と語彙を使い、論理的に説明しましょう。

示例: I learned about global warming at school, and I know that the ice in Antarctica is melting. This causes problems for polar bears and other animals because their habitats are disappearing. I think this is a serious issue nowadays.

建议: 答えが不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、文をつなぐ接続詞を使いましょう。

示例: Yes, definitely. I want to travel around the world to experience different climates and cultures. I believe visiting other countries will allow me to learn many new things and have valuable experiences.

× There is a rainy season called.

✓ There is a rainy season called 'tsuyu'.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the name of the rainy season. Adding the name clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× See you in Japanese.

✓ It's called 'tsuyu' in Japanese.

The phrase 'See you in Japanese' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'It's called ... in Japanese' to indicate the name of something in Japanese.

× And. Uhm, always the sky is gloomy and cloudy is mostly rains, so I feel unhappy.

✓ And, the sky is always gloomy and cloudy, and it mostly rains, so I feel unhappy.

The original sentence has fragmented structure and incorrect verb usage. Combining clauses properly and correcting verb forms improves clarity.

× I prefer cold weather more than hot weather because I don't want to get sweaty and also the clothes in winter or closes are also cute in winter.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I don't want to get sweaty, and also the clothes in winter are cute.

The phrase 'prefer cold weather more than hot weather' is incorrect; 'prefer A to B' is the correct form. Also, 'closes' is a typo for 'clothes', and the sentence is redundant.

× I prefer wet weather more than dry wizard because I have dry eyes and I'm not. Good at. Dry weathers.

✓ I prefer wet weather to dry weather because I have dry eyes and I'm not good with dry weather.

Again, 'prefer A more than B' should be 'prefer A to B'. 'Wizard' is a typo for 'weather'. Also, 'dry weathers' should be singular 'dry weather'.

× Uhm honestly I'm not. I'm not a habit of checking the weather forecast, but I sometimes check the weather forecast to think about my schedules an went to go out or not.

✓ Honestly, I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but I sometimes check it to think about my schedule and whether to go out or not.

The phrase 'I'm not a habit' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I'm not in the habit'. Also, 'schedules an went to go out' is incorrect and should be 'schedule and whether to go out'.

× I also studied at about global warming at school and I knew that the ice in Antarctica is melting and some polar bears and other animals in Antarctica is suffering because they don't have to have that.

✓ I also studied about global warming at school and I know that the ice in Antarctica is melting and some polar bears and other animals in Antarctica are suffering because of that.

'I knew' should be 'I know' to match present relevance. 'Animals ... is suffering' should be 'are suffering' to agree with plural subject. 'Because they don't have to have that' is incorrect; 'because of that' is correct.

× Ask definitely yes I want to travel around the world and see other cultures and including classmates and I think I can have many new experiences so I want to go to other countries not as famous Japan and. Knew a lot of things.

✓ Yes, definitely. I want to travel around the world and see other cultures, including classmates, and I think I can have many new experiences. So I want to go to other countries, not just famous Japan, and learn a lot of things.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Ask definitely yes' is incorrect; 'Yes, definitely' is correct. 'Including classmates' is unclear but kept as is. 'Not as famous Japan' should be 'not just famous Japan'. 'Knew a lot of things' should be 'learn a lot of things'.