天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o shongothito korte paren. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe, tarpor proyojon moto bistarito tothyo dite hobe. Apnar kotha onek bar bar hocche, ar kichu kotha obosshoi spostho kora dorkar. English e sentence gulo shohoje o shothik bhabe gathan korte chesta korun.

示例: I live in a hot and humid country with six distinct seasons. For example, we have a long summer lasting three months, followed by a rainy season, autumn, and winter. This variety allows us to enjoy different weather throughout the year.

建议: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu aro kichu specific karon o udahoron dite paren. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke aro shongothito korte paren. English e apnar feelings o karon spostho bhabe bolte chesta korun.

示例: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors. For instance, during summer, I can go to the park or meet friends, which makes me feel happy and active.

建议: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ja shothik korte hobe. Apni linking words babohar kore uttor ke aro logical korte paren. English e subject-verb agreement o sentence structure bhalo bhabe maintain korun.

示例: I usually prefer dry weather because rainy days make me feel gloomy. Moreover, sunlight boosts my energy and mood, so I enjoy sunny days more.

建议: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu sentence e grammar o word choice e bhul ache. Apni linking words babohar kore uttor ke aro shongothito korte paren. English e spostho o shothik sentence gathan er dike khub monojog din.

示例: I don't usually check the weather forecast daily. However, when I plan a trip or outdoor activity, I always check it to prepare accordingly. For example, if it is going to rain, I take an umbrella with me.

建议: Apnar uttor adhura o spostho noy. Apni proshner uttor shuru thekei spostho topic sentence deben, tarpor supporting details deben. English e sentence gulo shothik bhabe shesh korte hobe, ar proyojon moto linking words babohar korte hobe.

示例: I believe climate change has caused noticeable effects in my country. For example, summers have become longer while winters are shorter than before, which affects agriculture and daily life.

建议: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu sentence e repetition o kichu word missing ache. Apni sentence gulo aro shothik o shongothito korte linking words babohar korun. English e spostho o complete sentence gathan korun.

示例: Absolutely, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For instance, since I live in a hot and humid country, I have never experienced snowy winters. I would enjoy experiencing warm and cozy winter nights with snow.

× I generally don't prefer a rainy days because it's kinda makes me feel gloomy and sad.

✓ I generally don't prefer rainy days because it kinda makes me feel gloomy and sad.

The phrase 'a rainy days' is incorrect because 'days' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'prefer' is followed by a plural noun without an article here. Removing 'a' corrects the noun phrase.

× I generally don't prefer a rainy days because it's kinda makes me feel gloomy and sad.

✓ I generally don't prefer rainy days because it kinda makes me feel gloomy and sad.

The noun 'days' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Using 'a' with a plural noun is grammatically incorrect.

× I prefer sunlight more than a gloomy days because it gives it makes me feel more energetic and joyful.

✓ I prefer sunlight more than gloomy days because it makes me feel more energetic and joyful.

The phrase 'a gloomy days' is incorrect because 'days' is plural and should not have the singular article 'a'. Also, 'gives it makes me' is redundant; 'makes me' suffices.

× I prefer sunlight more than a gloomy days because it gives it makes me feel more energetic and joyful.

✓ I prefer sunlight more than gloomy days because it makes me feel more energetic and joyful.

The plural noun 'days' should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the noun phrase.

× For instance, if the weather focus just showing it's going to rain, I will probably take an umbrella with me before going.

✓ For instance, if the weather forecast just shows it's going to rain, I will probably take an umbrella with me before going.

The word 'focus' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'forecast'. Also, 'showing' should be 'shows' to agree with the singular subject 'forecast'.

× For instance, if the weather focus just showing it's going to rain, I will probably take an umbrella with me before going.

✓ For instance, if the weather forecast just shows it's going to rain, I will probably take an umbrella with me before going.

The verb should be in third person singular form 'shows' to agree with the singular subject 'forecast'. 'Showing' is incorrect here.

× I think the the effect of climate change is pretty evident like we see a change in the timing of the season in the country where I live in because summer days are getting more longer and then winter stays very for very short time.

✓ I think the effect of climate change is pretty evident; we see a change in the timing of the seasons in the country where I live because summer days are getting longer and winter stays for a very short time.

'Season' should be plural 'seasons' to match the context. 'More longer' is incorrect; 'longer' alone suffices. 'For very short time' needs the article 'a' before 'very short time'.

× I think the the effect of climate change is pretty evident like we see a change in the timing of the season in the country where I live in because summer days are getting more longer and then winter stays very for very short time.

✓ I think the effect of climate change is pretty evident; we see a change in the timing of the seasons in the country where I live because summer days are getting longer and winter stays for a very short time.

The preposition 'in' at the end of 'where I live in' is unnecessary and should be removed for correct grammar.

× Absolutely, I would love to travel the whole world an enjoy different weather, climates and environments.

✓ Absolutely, I would love to travel the whole world and enjoy different weather, climates, and environments.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. Also, 'weather' is uncountable and does not need plural form, but 'climates' and 'environments' are plural and correctly used.

× For instance, I live in a very hot and humid country and I have never experienced no.

✓ For instance, I live in a very hot and humid country and I have never experienced snow.

The phrase 'experienced no' is incorrect; likely the intended word is 'snow'. 'No' is not a noun here and causes confusion.

× So I would love to go to a place where I can I can experience the warm and cozy winter nights where it's snowing outside.

✓ So I would love to go to a place where I can experience warm and cozy winter nights where it's snowing outside.

The phrase 'I can I can' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'I can'. Also, 'the warm and cozy winter nights' can be used without 'the' if speaking generally.