天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'Four Seasons' nên viết thường và 'the other season' nên là 'the other seasons'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: The weather in Hanoi changes throughout the four seasons. Summer is usually very hot and humid, which can be uncomfortable for foreigners. However, autumn is much more pleasant with cooler temperatures and a gentle breeze.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'A absolutely' nên là 'I absolutely' và 'applying spot' có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc dùng từ sai. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'putting on layer of heavy clothes in the coat'.

示例: I absolutely prefer hot weather because I find it more comfortable to wear light clothes like shorts and T-shirts instead of heavy coats. Moreover, summer is better for activities like going to the beach or sunbathing, which I really enjoy.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'it right weather', 'leave heavy rain', 'might daily life quite difficult', 'tried weather'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I prefer dry weather in Hanoi because heavy rain often causes flooding due to poor drainage, which makes daily life difficult. Also, dry weather is better for outdoor activities like playing football or going for a walk.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'a plan to go outside', 'notice toys like', 'Says it will rain a preferred'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng thì và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I usually check the weather forecast only when I plan to go outside and notice signs like dark clouds or humid air. For example, if it looks like it might rain, I check my phone to see the forecast. If rain is expected, I prefer to stay at home to avoid getting wet.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'melting observers', 'only damaged the every culture', 'destroy habitats that many polar animals'. Bạn nên học cách diễn đạt chính xác và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I think climate change has caused many serious problems recently. For example, rising temperatures have led to the melting of ice in polar regions, which not only damages land for humans but also destroys habitats for many polar animals, such as polar bears.

建议: Bạn có lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp như 'different camels' (có thể là 'climates'), 'caused me to get sick', 'I just going to visit'. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm, chính tả và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

示例: No, I don't think I would like to visit cities with completely different climates because I have some health issues. For example, extreme cold or hot weather can make me feel uncomfortable or even cause me to get sick. I prefer to visit cities with similar climates to mine.

× In Hanoi, where I live, the weather changes throughout Four Seasons, summer, spring, winter and autumn.

✓ In Hanoi, where I live, the weather changes throughout the four seasons: summer, spring, winter, and autumn.

The phrase 'Four Seasons' should be in lowercase and preceded by 'the' as it refers to a specific set of seasons. Also, seasons should be plural and listed with commas and a colon for clarity.

× However, the other season, especially autumn, are much more pleasant with cooler temperature and gentle breeze.

✓ However, the other seasons, especially autumn, are much more pleasant with cooler temperatures and a gentle breeze.

'Season' should be plural 'seasons' to match 'other'. 'Temperature' should be plural 'temperatures' because it refers to general conditions. 'Gentle breeze' needs an article 'a' before it.

× A absolutely prefer hot weather because I find it more comfortable to wear light clothes like shorts and T-shirts instead of putting on layer of heavy clothes in the coat.

✓ I absolutely prefer hot weather because I find it more comfortable to wear light clothes like shorts and T-shirts instead of putting on layers of heavy clothes and a coat.

'A' is incorrect; it should be 'I'. 'Layer' should be plural 'layers' because it refers to multiple items. 'In the coat' is incorrect; it should be 'and a coat' to indicate wearing a coat.

× Moreover, summertime is more suitable for activities like going to the beach or applying spot which I really enjoy.

✓ Moreover, summertime is more suitable for activities like going to the beach or sunbathing, which I really enjoy.

'Applying spot' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'applying sunscreen' or 'sunbathing'. 'Sunbathing' fits better as an activity. Also, a comma is needed before 'which'.

× I think I prefer it right weather in Hanoi, where leave heavy rain often causes floodings due to our poor drainage infrastructure, which might daily life quite difficult.

✓ I think I prefer dry weather in Hanoi, where heavy rain often causes flooding due to our poor drainage infrastructure, which might make daily life quite difficult.

'It right weather' is incorrect; it should be 'dry weather'. 'Where leave heavy rain' is incorrect; 'where heavy rain' is correct. 'Floodings' should be 'flooding'. 'Which might daily life quite difficult' is missing a verb; 'which might make daily life quite difficult' is correct.

× Moreover, I think tried weather is more suitable for outdoor activities, for example playing football or going for a walk.

✓ Moreover, I think dry weather is more suitable for outdoor activities, for example playing football or going for a walk.

'Tried weather' is a typo; it should be 'dry weather'.

× I usually check the weather forecast only when a plan to go outside and notice toys like dark clouds or humid air, for example if it looks like it might rain.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast only when I plan to go outside and notice signs like dark clouds or humid air, for example, if it looks like it might rain.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'plan'. 'Toys' is incorrect; it should be 'signs'. Commas are needed for clarity.

× I will check my phone to see if rain is expected in the forecast. Says it will rain a preferred to stay at home to avoid getting wet.

✓ I will check my phone to see if rain is expected in the forecast. If it says it will rain, I prefer to stay at home to avoid getting wet.

'Says it will rain a preferred to stay at home' is a fragmented and incorrect sentence. It should be 'If it says it will rain, I prefer to stay at home'.

× I think climate change has caused many severe problems in recent year.

✓ I think climate change has caused many severe problems in recent years.

'Year' should be plural 'years' because it refers to multiple recent years.

× For example, the rising temperature has led to the melting observers in the polar regions which only damaged the every culture.

✓ For example, the rising temperature has led to the melting of icebergs in the polar regions, which has damaged not only the environment but also the culture.

'Melting observers' is incorrect; it should be 'melting of icebergs'. 'Only damaged the every culture' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'has damaged not only the environment but also the culture' for clarity.

× Land for humans, but also destroy habitats that many polar animals, for example polar bear.

✓ It has affected land for humans and also destroyed habitats of many polar animals, for example, polar bears.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject and verb. It should be a complete sentence explaining the effects on land and habitats.

× No, I don't think I would like to visit cities that have completely different camels from where I live because I have some health issues.

✓ No, I don't think I would like to visit cities that have completely different climates from where I live because I have some health issues.

'Camels' is a typo; it should be 'climates'.

× For example, extreme cold or hot weather can make me feel very uncomfortable or even caused me to get sick.

✓ For example, extreme cold or hot weather can make me feel very uncomfortable or even cause me to get sick.

'Caused' is past tense and does not agree with 'can make'; it should be 'cause' to maintain parallel structure.

× I just going to visit cities that have similar climates.

✓ I just go to visit cities that have similar climates.

'I just going' is incorrect; it should be 'I just go' or 'I only visit' to form a correct sentence.