天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时句子结构不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议注意句子连接，避免使用不完整句子，并且注意时态和主谓一致。

示例: I live near the sea, so the weather is generally pleasant. Although summers can be hot and winters cold, most people enjoy the climate. It doesn't rain much, but it's not too dry, making it a comfortable place to live.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并且避免口语化的错误。

示例: To be honest, I definitely prefer cold weather because I can wear more clothes. If it's hot, I sweat a lot and feel uncomfortable.

建议: 回答中有发音或拼写错误，句子不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，并且注意词汇的正确使用。

示例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable to live in. Moreover, damp weather can cause certain health problems, which is a concern for many people.

建议: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并且使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning to decide what clothes to wear. I think it's a good habit because it helps me know if I need to bring an umbrella or not.

建议: 回答不完整且含糊，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议组织完整句子，提供具体例子，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: From my perspective, climate change is closely linked to human activities. In recent years, extreme weather events like typhoons and droughts have greatly affected human life and the environment.

建议: 回答较好，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

示例: Of course, I would like to visit cities with different climates because they often have unique cultures and lifestyles. I enjoy trying new things and meeting different people, which I find very interesting and meaningful.

× Although the summer is hot and the winter is cold.

✓ The summer is hot and the winter is cold.

句子以'Although'开头但没有主句，导致句子结构不完整。建议去掉'Although'，使句子完整。

× But the people lived there all like the weather.

✓ But the people who live there all like the weather.

原句中'lived'使用了过去式，但描述的是现在的事实，应使用一般现在时'live'。

× It didn't rain much but is not too dry so it is a nice place to live.

✓ It doesn't rain much but it is not too dry, so it is a nice place to live.

前半句描述现在的情况，应该用一般现在时'doesn't rain'，并且缺少主语，需加上'it'。

× But the people lived there all like the weather.

✓ The people who live there all like the weather.

句首使用'But'连接句子不当，且句子结构不完整，建议去掉'But'并调整句子结构。

× Be 'cause I can. Dress more clothes if that is code but if hard I will sweat a lot and I failed uncomfortable.

✓ Because I can dress in more clothes if it is cold, but if it's hot I will sweat a lot and feel uncomfortable.

原句中'Be 'cause'拼写错误，'Dress'缺少主语，'that is code'应为'it is cold'，'failed uncomfortable'应为'feel uncomfortable'，需要正确使用代词和动词形式。

× A try clam.

✓ A dry climate.

原句拼写错误，'A try clam'应为'A dry climate'，形容词和名词拼写错误。

× I need to dip end it to choose my clothes to wear.

✓ I need to depend on it to choose my clothes to wear.

原句中'dip end it'拼写错误，应为'depend on it'，正确使用介词短语。

× I think it is a good habit because it can help me know whether if I need to bring an umbrella or we are more.

✓ I think it is a good habit because it can help me know whether I need to bring an umbrella or not.

原句中'we are more'无意义，应为'not'，且去掉多余的'if'，正确使用代词和句式。

× Recent years several extreme weather affect humans activities a lot like typhoons and dries.

✓ In recent years, several extreme weather events have affected human activities a lot, like typhoons and droughts.

原句缺少介词短语开头，'weather'应为'weather events'，'affect'时态错误，应为现在完成时'have affected'，'humans activities'应为'human activities'，'dries'应为'droughts'。

× It. UNCW. Sustainable Relate.

✓ It is unsustainable and related.

原句为无意义的词组，需改为正确的形容词和动词形式表达意思。

× different climates definitely developed different cultures and lifestyles.

✓ different climates have definitely developed different cultures and lifestyles.

原句缺少助动词'have'，时态应为现在完成时，正确使用动词时态。