天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "horses sticky". Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh câu ngắt quãng và thêm liên từ để câu văn tự nhiên hơn.

示例: The weather where I live is usually very humid, especially during the rainy season from May to October. I find this quite uncomfortable because the high humidity makes me feel sticky. However, during the dry season, the weather is sunny and pleasant.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không đúng hoặc không rõ nghĩa như "cause and stress sweaters" hay "club temperatures where is horse weather". Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, có liên kết logic.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I feel more comfortable in it. For example, I enjoy wearing warm clothes like sweaters, which I find cozy and stylish. Also, I have more energy in cold temperatures compared to hot weather.

建议: Bạn nên tránh ngắt quãng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu có liên kết để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

示例: I prefer dry weather because I feel more comfortable when it is not raining. For example, I can go out and hang out with my friends or go to the theater without worrying about the rain.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần tránh câu ngắt quãng và lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như "is the beginning of the day". Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually check the weather forecast at the beginning of the day because I want to know what the weather will be like. For example, if it is going to rain, I can bring an umbrella or wear a raincoat. This helps me plan my day better and choose suitable clothes.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi như "harder summers" hay "coders winters". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có liên kết giữa các ý để thể hiện sự hiểu biết tốt hơn về chủ đề.

示例: I think the effects of climate change in recent years have been quite noticeable. For example, the weather has become more unpredictable with hotter summers and colder winters than before. In my city, I have noticed that summer days are sometimes less hot, but sudden storms and heavy rain occur more often.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Hãy tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và có liên kết.

示例: Yes, absolutely. I would like to visit cities with different climates from where I live in Vietnam because it would be interesting to experience new weather conditions. For example, I want to visit cold cities like Moscow or warm cities like Dubai.

× Well, even now the weather is usually very humid and really especially during the rainy season from May to October.

✓ Well, even now the weather is usually very humid, especially during the rainy season from May to October.

The phrase 'really especially' is redundant and incorrect. 'Especially' alone is sufficient to emphasize the time period. Remove 'really' to improve clarity and correctness.

× Because the high humidity makes me feel horses sticky.

✓ Because the high humidity makes me feel hot and sticky.

The word 'horses' is incorrect here; likely a mishearing or typo for 'hot'. The adjective 'hot' correctly describes the feeling caused by humidity. Also, 'sticky' is an adjective describing the sensation.

× However, during dry season the weather is sunny. Blessing.

✓ However, during the dry season, the weather is sunny and pleasant.

The sentence 'Blessing.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'and pleasant' completes the thought and improves sentence structure. Also, 'dry season' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I prefers dry weather because.

✓ I prefer dry weather because.

The verb 'prefers' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'prefer' for the first person singular.

× I feel so confortable when. Uh. When? When is no, there is no rain. Anne. I can go out and hang out with my friends on going to the theater.

✓ I feel so comfortable when there is no rain. Then I can go out and hang out with my friends or go to the theater.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Confortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'comfortable'. The phrase 'When is no, there is no rain' is incorrect; it should be 'when there is no rain'. 'Anne' is likely a mishearing of 'then'. The phrase 'on going to the theater' should be 'or go to the theater' to express alternatives.

× I will look to the VCC sisters had. Different climates from where I lived in Vietnam because this would be interesting to experience new weather condition.

✓ I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live in Vietnam because it would be interesting to experience new weather conditions.

The phrase 'look to the VCC sisters had' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended as 'would like to visit other cities'. 'Lived' should be 'live' to match present tense. 'Weather condition' should be plural 'weather conditions'. The preposition 'from' is correctly used here.