天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct and clear description of the weather, using correct tenses and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and keep it concise.

示例: The weather where I live is quite varied. Winters are cold, summers are hot, and we have a monsoon season that lasts for about two months from June to July.

建议: Your answer has some good points but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Use linking words properly and avoid vague phrases like 'days are shown'.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing colorful jackets. Also, I sleep better during cold nights since they are longer and more peaceful.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using simple and correct sentences.

示例: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go out and spend time with my friends. We can enjoy outdoor activities without worrying about rain.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

示例: Yes, I often check the weather forecast before going outside. It helps me plan my day, and if rain is predicted, I prefer to stay at home.

建议: Your answer mentions relevant points but lacks clarity and correct vocabulary. Use precise terms and explain the effects more clearly.

示例: In recent years, climate change has caused problems like global warming and increased pollution. Deforestation and other human activities have also contributed to these effects.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your interest clearly and use correct vocabulary related to activities and climate.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy exploring nature. I often go hiking and like to wear clothes suitable for the weather.

× Will be relieved the weather is very more great as it is cold in winter seasons and very cold in summer seasons as well as there are some monsoon season for two months between June 2 July.

✓ I will be relieved because the weather is much better; it is cold in winter and very hot in summer, and there is a monsoon season for two months between June and July.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers like 'very more great' which is incorrect; 'much better' is appropriate. Also, 'monsoon season' should be singular with 'a'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Well, I like cold weather because I have to wear a colorful jackets on the cold weather.

✓ Well, I like cold weather because I have to wear colorful jackets in cold weather.

'A colorful jackets' is incorrect because 'jackets' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'on the cold weather' should be 'in cold weather' as the correct preposition for weather conditions.

× Moreover, I also take good sleep in that weather because the nights are very long and days are shown.

✓ Moreover, I also sleep well in that weather because the nights are very long and the days are bright.

'Take good sleep' is not idiomatic; 'sleep well' is correct. 'Days are shown' is unclear; 'days are bright' or 'days are long' is appropriate. Also, 'in that weather' is correct preposition usage.

× Basically I like dry valley because on better days are not preferred so much prefer to hang out with my friends out after my home.

✓ Basically, I like dry valleys because on better days I prefer to hang out with my friends outside my home.

'Dry valley' should be plural 'dry valleys' if general. 'On better days are not preferred' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'on better days I prefer'. 'Out after my home' is incorrect; 'outside my home' is correct.

× So I like drive others to do some activities in nature.

✓ So I like to encourage others to do some activities in nature.

'I like drive others' is incorrect sentence structure; 'I like to encourage others' is correct and conveys intended meaning.

× Yes, definitely when, uh, when I like to go outside from home, I often check weather because it helps me to give me a good prediction about weather because.

✓ Yes, definitely, when I want to go outside my home, I often check the weather because it helps me get a good prediction about the weather.

'Go outside from home' is incorrect; 'go outside my home' is correct. 'Check weather' needs 'the'. 'Helps me to give me' is redundant; 'helps me get' is better.

× I did not like, I do not like, very needy, so if there was prediction of rain, then I prefer to stay in my home.

✓ I do not like being very wet, so if there is a prediction of rain, I prefer to stay at home.

'Very needy' is incorrect; likely meant 'very wet'. 'If there was prediction' should be 'if there is a prediction'. 'Stay in my home' is better as 'stay at home'.

× Well, in recent years there's a lot of effects between climate genes, such as due to globalization, global warming and some other factors like pollution, afforestation, deforestation and many more.

✓ Well, in recent years there have been many effects of climate change, such as globalization, global warming, and other factors like pollution, afforestation, deforestation, and more.

'A lot of effects between climate genes' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'many effects of climate change'. 'There is' should be 'there have been' for plural effects. 'Between' is incorrect preposition here.

× Yes, I love to go different cities to explore their tracks because I am very keen awake, interest in nature.

✓ Yes, I love to go to different cities to explore their trails because I am very keen and interested in nature.

'Go different cities' needs 'go to different cities'. 'Tracks' is better as 'trails'. 'Keen awake, interest' is incorrect; corrected to 'keen and interested'.

× I usually go for hiking, send some other or wear for suitable climate.

✓ I usually go hiking, do some other activities, or wear suitable clothes for the climate.

'Go for hiking' should be 'go hiking'. 'Send some other or wear' is unclear; corrected to 'do some other activities or wear suitable clothes'. Sentence restructured for clarity.