天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid repetition and organize your answer logically by mentioning the seasons in order and their characteristics briefly.

示例: The weather in my country includes six seasons: summer, rainy autumn, late autumn, winter, and spring. Summer lasts the longest, followed by the rainy season, then autumn and late autumn, and finally winter and spring.

建议: Focus on giving a clear preference and explain your reasons coherently. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: I prefer cold weather because summers in my country are very long and hot. Since winter lasts only a few months, I miss the cold season and enjoy it more when it comes.

建议: Provide a complete and clear answer with reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear words. Explain why you prefer dry weather with specific details.

示例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes the roads muddy and difficult to walk or drive on.

建议: Answer directly and clearly about your habit of checking the weather forecast. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Explain when and why you check it.

示例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning to plan my day and avoid any unexpected weather conditions.

建议: Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Provide specific examples of climate change effects and use linking words to connect your points.

示例: Climate change has caused hotter summers and heavier rainfall in recent years, which has led to flooding in my country.

建议: Give a complete and clear answer. Explain your reasons for wanting to visit places with different climates, using proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially those with snowfall, because I have never experienced snow before and I find it fascinating.

× In my country there are six season the summer, rainy autumn, late autumn, winter and spring.

✓ In my country there are six seasons: summer, rainy autumn, late autumn, winter, and spring.

The word 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to multiple seasons. Also, a colon is needed before listing the seasons for clarity.

× But the summer covers most of the year.

✓ But summer covers most of the year.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'summer' when speaking generally about the season.

× Then the rain comes.

✓ Then the rain comes.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× And then autumn and late autumn.

✓ Then comes autumn and late autumn.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal; restructuring improves clarity and flow.

× And then. Winter and spring.

✓ Then winter and spring follow.

Fragmented sentence; needs to be combined for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× At most of the time, the summer.

✓ Most of the time, it is summer.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; rephrasing provides a complete thought.

× Personally I love cold more than or Twitter because in my country the summer dominates most of the time.

✓ Personally, I love cold more than hot weather because in my country summer dominates most of the time.

'Or Twitter' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; replaced with 'hot weather' for clarity. Added commas for readability.

× And. We saw the winter for. Like G or G or four months so.

✓ And we have winter for about three or four months.

Incorrect words and fragmented sentence; corrected to proper plural and clearer expression.

× We missed the winter holier.

✓ We miss the winter holiday.

'Holier' is incorrect; likely meant 'holiday'. Corrected spelling and sentence structure.

× That's why I prefer cold. More than what?

✓ That's why I prefer cold weather.

Fragmented sentence; 'More than what?' is unclear and unnecessary.

× I prefer dry weather. Warden would be 'cause in order that the road becomes muddy.

✓ I prefer dry weather because when it rains, the roads become muddy.

'Warden would be' is incorrect and unclear; rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast, especially over name.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast, especially in the morning.

'Over name' is incorrect; likely meant 'in the morning'. Corrected for clarity.

× Make some plan about my former chips.

✓ I make some plans about my activities.

'Former chips' is unclear and incorrect; replaced with 'activities' for meaning and corrected sentence structure.

× I used to check the weather forecast because I don't want to hassle the weather.

✓ I used to check the weather forecast because I didn't want to be surprised by the weather.

Mixed tenses; 'don't want' should be past tense 'didn't want'. 'Hassle the weather' is incorrect expression; replaced with 'be surprised by the weather'.

× When I was in shape.

✓ When I was in shape.

This is a fragment; needs to be connected to previous sentence for clarity.

× Yeah, there are a lot of effect of climate change in recent year specially.

✓ Yeah, there are a lot of effects of climate change in recent years, especially.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' and 'year' should be plural 'years' to match 'a lot of' and recent time frame.

× This summer the heart becomes hotter in recent year and in rainy system is rainy too heavy that became some flawed in our country.

✓ This summer, the heat has become hotter in recent years, and the rainy season is too heavy, causing some floods in our country.

'Heart' is incorrect; should be 'heat'. 'Rainy system' should be 'rainy season'. 'Rainy too heavy' is incorrect; rephrased for clarity. 'Flawed' is incorrect; replaced with 'floods'.

× Visit. Who's has different climate or weather? Be 'cause I missed a lot of things.

✓ I would like to visit places that have different climates or weather because I miss a lot of things.

Fragmented and unclear sentence; restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That other has specially snowfalls.

✓ Especially places that have snowfalls.

'That other has' is incorrect; rephrased to clarify meaning and correct pronoun use.